Hello, me again for the 2nd 3rd of your first gift.
WHAT THATS THE END OF THIS CHAPTER!?! You evil person XD I was really starting to get into it, I want to read more so I hope you update soon (I dont normally say things like that But I LOVE THIS TOO MUCH) At one point I thought Will was Draco because the blonde hair and grey eyes but I am happy hes not. I love how you started this story, straight away there was a whole load of Action and I love how you kind of keep everything secret, like what the letters were about. I cant wait to read more :D
Love this so much I rate it 9.8/10 :) Usually OC/OC isnt normally my thing but I love this.
xxSecret Santaxx Report Review
I love this prologue...it's powerful. I really hope you continue this since I will fave it to make it easier to keep up with updates.
I especially love the first sentence since it was what pulled me in.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm starting to continue it now, but I don't know when the first proper chapter will be up. Glad you liked it! Report Review
Wow, I just wanted to let you know that I thought this was incredibly well written. Now it leaves us readers wondering what was in the Letters. Obviously about love, but maybe it was more, maybe they were doing things as a resistance to Death Eaters outside of the Order since he was an inside connection. Anyway, I almost NEVER read Dark/Horror stuff at all, but this was really interesting. Good luck on the story, I think the only reasons there could be for not getting more reviews is, it's so good a story they don't feel they have to, or it might not be a kind of story that's looked for. It's not your fault though, it's just different than the norm, and that's a good thing :) great job!Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review! I saw that you had mentionned a fic called Letters on your status, but didn't even think it would be mine! I've put off carrying it on since it didn't seem all to popular, but now I'm writing the next few chapters. Thank you! Report Review
Happy [belated-ish] Valentine's Day! :P
Wow. This is so brilliant. I totally loved this! Really, it's amazing!! The plot, the whole story was just really well written. I loved the blood traitor idea, and having Theodore Nott Senior, a name we recognise as the father was good! I really liked the character of Bea. You set up the whole situation really well with few words.
The beginning paragraph was lovely. Absolutely intriguing and really nostalgic. The ending too, is really intriguing. It feels like there's some unfinished ending, so I'd love for you to keep on updating and write more! Honestly, this is such a great chapter! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!! :D
I hope you keep on writing this? :)
- Charlotte :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it- I was worried since I had no reviews that it was no good and was worrying about continuing it, but I definately will now! Report Review
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