As I thought, that was quite interesting. Again, good job! Report Review
Very interesting prologue, indeed. I really appreciate you taking the time to follow the original canon and storyline; it makes for the story as a whole to seem more realistic. I think it is interesting that you have taken some of the facts that we know (Kingsley becoming Minister) but have added their own personal dilemma to the situation. Excellent work!Author's Response: Thanks, I like Harry Potter too much to change any of the canon, but I like to expand on it Report Review
Great chapter. Can't wait for Luna's interrogation, that should be interesting.Author's Response: Thanks, this chapter marks the halfway point of the story too, the killer will be revealed soon Report Review
I LOVE this story!! Please write more, I have to find out who did it!
Good job!Author's Response: okay, I will Report Review
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