It's a wonderful one shot. I like who you portray Dom and how she lives for her art and passions! Good job!Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback! I have a very clear Dom in my mind, so she is easy for me to write when I get ideas. Thanks for taking the time to review! Report Review
Your writing is great. I think that this one-shot would be better if it were a little longer. Or maybe if it only had known characters in it. This idea seems better suited to be really expanded into a longer fic. I'm surprised that writing something longer didn't go well for you, since that really seems like what you'd like to write! Keep on writing!Author's Response: Thank you so much! You are my first review EVER!!! I would love to try writing longer stories, but I get a bunch of ideas at once and then try to put them all into one place. Or put things in where I think they belong in the story without any in-between time. So instead of trying my hand at a long story, I'm just doing some one shots to get the creative juices flowing and trying to find my feet as a writer. As for the character I chose, I love Next-Gen. I think that it is the most interesting the read and to write. You have the names, ages, and some basic ideas about the personality based on the parents, but the rest is all up to you. And I've always had a pretty clear Dom in my head. Sadly, not many people seem to write about her.
Thank you again for the review and input! You have no idea how excited it made me! Report Review
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