{reviewid: 2158532, reviewer: 'Alice'}
8th July 2009:
to much diolog, but it is really good, try and make the plot and story longer it is to short!
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{reviewid: 1840226, reviewer: 'MoonyandProngs'}
22nd February 2008:
That was great story! I loved it! Wormtail showing up had worried there for a second, but Harry kick his butt was so cool! And finding out they had kids later was so sweet! Great work! 10!
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{reviewid: 960127, reviewer: 'GlueGun'}
15th April 2006:
Great Chapter
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{reviewid: 555521, reviewer: 'riaJem'}
21st June 2005:
well that was a short story!
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{reviewid: 364631, reviewer: 'HarrysDragonfly'}
6th February 2005:
Very nice ending
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{reviewid: 364620, reviewer: 'HarrysDragonfly'}
6th February 2005:
Very nice
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{reviewid: 352877, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Harry%20Potter'}
28th January 2005:
It was cool but what was with all the /'s
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{reviewid: 168136, reviewer: 'Prunkle'}
11th June 2004:
Very, very sweet! Cute, cute, cute!!! Good job!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 111735, reviewer: 'moe%20jay'}
2nd March 2004:
great nothing sad
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{reviewid: 74844, reviewer: 'Guin%20Lockley'}
21st October 2003:
What a lovely story! Well done!
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{reviewid: 61940, reviewer: 'arukas'}
14th August 2003:
Hmmm, the noly problem i had with it was that you changed both scene and time so often, there was really no soul. I think if you perhaps pad it out a littel it would be really good!
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{reviewid: 59932, reviewer: 'LilyFlower'}
11th August 2003:
Well I have a lot to say so let me start somewhere lol. The plot as a whole was great but it seemed a bit rushed but that\'s ok. As for a few minor spelling errors in the beginning it was fine, all writers make spelling errors so it\'s not that much of a big deal. They always seemed to be moving...when they were in one place a few seconds later they\'d be in another. Other then that I absolutely adored the story and you should definitely continue to write more like this. Harry and Hermione are my favorite pairings along with Lily and James. If you would like to you can read my stories...I have a new one up \"The Diary of Hermione Granger.\" Keep up the good work and I look foward to your future works!
~Lily Flower
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{reviewid: 60557, reviewer: 'GreenEyes'}
10th August 2003:
Very cute...keep going with this one :)
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{reviewid: 54180, reviewer: 'Mrspotter'}
7th August 2003:
I loved it. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy. H/Hr 4eva.
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{reviewid: 59977, reviewer: 'crazyfreak'}
7th August 2003:
it was very interesting you really should continue
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