oh my god this is so sweet, i love tom!!! the way he talks and acts doesnt sound like voldemort whatsoever, but it works because you slip in all these little details. for example, when he said that Sio was the only thing stopping him from killing his parents.

i also really like the description of Siobhan.

the end where Siobhan dies seemed kind-of predictable, but i still liked it. great job!

Author's Response: Awh, thank you!
I really have always had this fascination with him, especially when he was younger. I feel like he totally could have been a different person.
There was no way around it, though. My idea for this story was showing a girl that could have stopped him from becoming Voldemort and her being killed, which only motivated him more.
But, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, :D

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Perfect. So so perfect.

Author's Response: :D
Thank you so much.
That means the world to me to hear, :)

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This is really sweet...at least in the beginning :). It's a really heart-felt fanfic and I think it shows the used-to-be-soft side of Tom. Overall awesome piece. :)

Author's Response: Haha, yea, the end is a little rough.
Thank you for reading!
:D

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Yup, yet another reason for V to go up against Potters. Nicely written.

Author's Response: I tried to make it seem realistic as so.
Thank you!

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