Cute story. It's a nice little vignette into Lily's thoughts and I think it would fit her character very well. Thanks! Report Review
This is extremely cute! I am so glad that Lysander can make Lily so happy and not like part of the crowd.
She seems to love him very much as well and I'm glad that they seem made for each other.
I like how you described how she feels overshadowed because everyone would have done things better, kind of like how Ron used to feel at school and that.
I thoroughly enjoyed this
alicia and anne
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I think it's short and sweet. The way she sees Lysander and how he sees her is adorable (yeah that word is supposed to describe teddy bears but whatever). I think it's cool that you show how she has grown and accepted herself in so few words. She realizes that she may have true love and is thankful for it. She knows that she can be who she is, because she is Lily, and there is no other Lily. Like I said, short and sweet (: Nice writing!Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that is the way it came across. Report Review
It was short and sweet! I adored it! Lily is the only next gen chacacter that I think is good with Lorcan or Lysander since they are fairly younger then the rest!
-KattiaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad it worked :) Thank you for the review! Report Review
This is really good. I often thought that the next generation would have exactly the problems you described. I don't think this was sad at all. It was hopeful, and really, really good.
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