OH. MY. GOD. PLEASE UPDATE SOON THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!:):):)Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I just started working on Chapter 7 yesterday, so it should be up soon!! Thanks for reading(: Report Review
This is a good chapter! Hope you're still planning on writing more, because I'd love to read it! :)Author's Response: Thank you!! I do plan on finishing this, I'm glad you liked it!! Report Review
If you don't update soon, I'm going to be really mad.
An attack? OMG!Author's Response: I'll update asap!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
Hello again Ginny_Wa-na_Be,
Sorry I've not been able to read HPFF for a bit.but am catching up today.
WHOA! What a cliffie. Glad to see that Harry and Draco have burried the hatchet but sorry to see that Ron is being a git. How can he be so judgemental after what he did to Hermione the year before. Anyway, just wondering what or who has been attacked. Looking forward to more. Happy Writing. ~~Lauraf68Author's Response: lauraf68,
Sorry for the cliffhanger, I just couldn't resist! I'm glad you like the truce between Harry and Draco, I was a bit hesitant about ending their fued so early. As for Ron he has a bit of growing up to do as you can see. The next chapter will be up soon, thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Cliffhanger! Can't wait until the next update:)Author's Response: Yeah I have this thing for cliffhangers, next chapter should be up soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
Ahhh so hooked on this story already!!Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!! Report Review
Please continue soon, I love the storyAuthor's Response: I will, don't worry!! I'm glad you like the story, thanks for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
aw, thanks for the appreciation :)
unfortunately, I have some mixed feelings about this one. I really thought Ron and Hermione were really out of character. Ron because he had no real reason from when Harry and Ginny went out in 6th year to think he only liked her to get in her pants. And he knew full well that he only broke up with her to keep her safe. Even if there was that suspicion they were doing something in Ginny's room then, saying that he was only with her for that is REALLY over doing it. The only reason Ron blew up when they were on the run even was because of the Horcrux. Then if Ron ever did go that overboard you could bet Hermione would blow up and let him have a piece of her mind. She prolly wouldn't talk to him for a LONG time. I don't think she'd calm him down that easily and just let it go that easily either.
I did think it was really interesting how you went about Harry and Draco's interaction. That was pretty good :) I think that so many things are different that their interaction would bound to be different.
You had a lot of really great ideas in this chapter, I'm definitely curious to know what happens next, but maybe working on the characterization would help the story seem a little more believable. Or it could just be me :)
Just some ideas to throw around.
Can't wait for the next one regardless :)Author's Response: First of all your welcome but you completely deserve it for sticking with me thus far!! Second of all I see your point about the fight between Ron and Harry and there will be a reason behind Ron's blow-up later, don't worry!! And Hermione has a lot more things to say to Ron in the next chapter, can't say anymore without giving it away though so you'll just have to wait ;) I'm glad you liked the interaction between Harry and Draco, they'll be a good asset to each other in later chapters. I'm extremely happy you like the chapter and grateful for your feedback, thanks for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
Nice long chapter =D
Eh did not expect that from Ron - like I did think he'd be a bit 'what the hell are ye doing?' but to shout that at Harry was just awful!
Harry and Draco talking was funny, will be interesting to see how that goes down with Ron and Hermione!
Oh! Who's been attacked?? And by whom??Author's Response: The fight between Ron and Harry wasn't actually supposed to be that big but once I started I couldn't stop so it kind of progressed from there. I'm glad you liked the part between Harry and Draco and you'll find out who's been attacked in the next chapter!! Report Review
And just as I say it in the review of the last chapter the dialogue gets way better..well now I feel like a bit of an idiot =/ haha.
That was really moving, I really liked Harry's speech. It reminded me of Mariah Carey's song 'Bye Bye', don't know if you know it.
Oh and love that Nickelback song =]Author's Response: I always appreciate constructive criticism don't worry!! I'm glad you liked the speech and I have heard that song and I love it. Report Review
Liking the story so far, I've been looking for a story where Ginny doesn't just take him back straight away..however I did not expect hate haha.
You're really good at the descriptive writing and writing what's going on in people's heads but the dialogue seems a bit forced or something. I always find that's the hardest part to get right!
But really good work so far, I must read on and see what's gonna happen next =]Author's Response: I feel like there should be some animosity between them at first after everything they've been through and I do agree that dialogue is the hardest part to write and I'm glad you like it so far!! Report Review
Argh yer killin me.
Great story thus far, keep up the good work.Author's Response: Sorry!! I just have this thing for cliffhangers, there'll probably be a few more throughout the story. I'm glad you like it!! Report Review
that truce was quick...lol, keep it up!!!Author's Response: I thought it was about time they made up hahaa thanks for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
You are doing a brilliant job with this story! I have really enjoyed it from the start! Definitely on my favorite list! Keep it going!Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and I really appreciate you adding it to your favorites!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
I'm finding this story really enjoyable. It is like it is tying up all of the loose ends at the end of the book, and on top of this, it is still feasable!
Leanne :)Author's Response: Thank you, that's sort of the point of writing this story, tying up the loose ends, so I'm excited that it's fulfilling it's purpose. Thank you for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
Yay, I loved it! I read it once already, but forgot to review, so here it is :) I liked how Harry was starting to get more forward with Ginny before they went out to play. And also love the set up for draco. At first when I read it, and it was before you introduced Astoria, I thought she was going to be his parole officer or something lol which would have been funny, but maybe too cliche. I like this idea better :)
Over all I love it. Can't quite pin down which parts I love best. Great job!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and yeah I'm reading a story now where Draco falls in love with an auror that's working his case and I didn't want mine to sound too similar. Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
Thanks for the quick update and another great chapter!! I loved the moments between harry and ginny, they were perfect. I also liked the Draco and Astoria part!! Keep writing!Author's Response: I'll keep the time between chapters as short as possible and I'm glad you liked the chapter! There will be loads more Harry/Ginny and Draco/Astoria in future chapters, thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Very Nice Chapter. Very well written. (8/10)
I liked how Mrs. Weasley took her grief and used it to help her family. I like how everyone else followed suit and decided it was time for "some fresh air". But I especially liked how Harry and Ginny finally talked, "cleared the air", and are on the way to rebuilding their relationship!
I did notice at the beginning there was a small error. In one area you have defined Fleur's accent by adjusting the words phonetically, but yet the next sentence she speaks is written in normal fashion.
I do like what you did with Draco's story. Since he was cooerced into submission I think it only fair he is given a supervised second chance. Although I'm not sure I agree with your idea that Narcissa would go to live with Andromeda. I do agree that Andy would probably be very open to a reconciliation with Cissy. Afterall Cissy and Draco are her only living blood relative short of Teddy. I'm just not sure about the living together aspect of it.
But that aside I think this is the best chapter so far and I look forward to seeing more to your plot line. Happy Writing!!
~Lauraf68Author's Response: Dear Lauraf68,
Thanks for reviewing, you're feedback was very enjoyable to read. I'm glad that you liked the parts about Mrs. Weasley and Harry and Ginny, I thought it was about time they made up!
I'm also happy that you agree with me on the idea that Draco should be given a second chance. I do understand your point on Narcissa and Andromeda living together. I think that with Draco moving out and Lucius in prison, Narcissa would need someone to confide in after the war.
As for Fleur's dialogue, I appreciate you catching my mistake and I will be fixing that asap.
I'm so happy that you liked the chapter and thank you for sticking with my story!
Great Chapter... Please Don't Stop...Author's Response: Thank you and I won't!! Thanks for reading!! Report Review
Another good chapter! I enjoyed reading it. Especially liked the scene at malfoy manor. I hope there's more harry ginny in the next chapter. Please update soon!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the scene from Draco's perspective and there will be more Harry and Ginny in the next chapter. Chapter four is almost done, thanks for reading!! Report Review
Amazing sentiment!! Sound just like something Harry would say. I'm glad Ginny is at least 'talking' to him so that he can know at some point she will TALK with him.
I like the direction you're writing is going. Keep up the good work. Happy Writing. ~Lauraf68Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the speech!! I was really nervous about the feedback on it. Things are going to start heating up between Harry and Ginny, don't worry. Thank you for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
hey, my earlier name was gremlin, but finally got my own penname.
I loved the beginning part, and just so you know parts of my story is similar, but I wrote the chapter before I read this.
loved the idea of McGonagall and Dumbledore, since you never see her frazzled at all. You are sticking to the character's personalities too, although I don't really like seeing Ginny all mad at him, but that's a preference. Love the story in general though. Great job!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the idea of McGonagall and Dumbledore. I figured that their relationship had never really been talked about so I decided to add it in. Things will get better for Harry and Ginny don't worry! I'm happy you liked the story and thanks for reading! Report Review
Love the quarrel in the beginning with Ron and Hermione. Not mad about the end as long as you play it out well haha. We shall see, keep up the good work, I like your writing style.Author's Response: Haha I figured it was time for Ron and Hermione to have one of their arguments and things will get better for Harry and Ginny. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Another great chapter keep up the good work!! Your characterization is 100% realistic and accurate! Thanks for an enjoyable story!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and I'm happy that I can portray the characters correctly and thanks for reading! Report Review
You better post the next chapter soon because I hate this cliffhanger! Also I need Harry and Ginny to get together very soon!!! Otherwise great chapter :)Author's Response: Sorry for the cliffhanger but there had to be some drama! I'm glad you liked the chapter and the next one will be up soon, thanks for reading! Report Review
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