Reading Reviews for Dumbledore's Secert Weapon
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by orderofthephoenix A Happy Memory

19th February 2011:
Hey! I'm here with your review :D

You included good descriptions and imagery thoughout the story especially in the first paragraph. You certainly set the scene well. :)

There were a couple of spelling mistakes I found: 'Forrest' is spelt 'forest' and you should change 'short brake from the task' to' short break from the task'.

Apart from that, you've done a good job :)

-Sophia

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Review #2, by LilyFire A Happy Memory

16th February 2011:
This is really good. I couldn't really see any problems with it at all. And I'm intrigued...what is this powerful magic thing.hmm. Dumbledore was amazing...I just don't think he would call Remus 'Lupin'.
~LilyFire

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Review #3, by annie A Happy Memory

23rd December 2010:
No, continue, what happened!!

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