domonique is a GIRL!
other than that I love the story. I love
James, and my name is Anya :) Report Review
I hadn't realized that chapter one was a prologue. Oh well, this story is still good.
I liked what you did with Al. In every story that I read he's in Slytherin but he's good; it's interesting the fact that he is/might be bad. And I predict a lot of problems because of Scorpious.
Update soon and Merry Christmas.
P.S.: I don't know if you rushed the chapter and you didn't see some of the mistakes that you wrote, but you should consider getting a betta.Author's Response: It wasn't technically supposed to be a prologue, actually :P But if it looks like one then I suppose it is.
I've read it over a few times and I thought I'd got them all. I'll be sure to have another look.
Thanks for your review!! Report Review
I'm going to reserve judgment on this story for atleast until I've read a few more chapters. You really did one of the best James/OC character stories on here with Breathing and I'm curious to see if this story can top that one? Also, will you continue on with Breathing at some point since I'd love to see how that story ends? Anyways, this story is off to a good start and I am looking forward to reading more.Author's Response: I love James/OC so I am so happy you think my attempts are decent! I am continuing Breathing now. Thank you for the review! Report Review
WE WANT SOME ROMANCE! :D
Can't wait for the next chapter! James was sexy and awesome as usuall, and I really liked Anya's character ^^
Until next time.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Report Review
Keep them coming! :)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Report Review
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