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Review #1, by Maybe Promises, Promises

13th January 2011:
I thought this was a really sweet one-shot, especially when Nathan told her he liked her and it was cute her falling asleep on him. Also, loved the AVPM reference!

I noticed a few grammar mistakes in there and it would have been nice to see a bit more description but overall, very sweet and fluffy (I love fluff XP) I also like that you made Poppy a 'Puff - nice to see a glimpse of her younger years


Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry it took me so long to respond(I had Nargles attack my brain)
Yeah, Poppy looked like the Puffy type :)
And in this Del(my muse) she just wasn't being helpful at all so I was alone. :/
Again thanks for the review!

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Review #2, by miss_aurora Promises, Promises

27th December 2010:
Hello there! And first of all thank you for writing this Hufflepuff story because I enjoy reading this and reviewing this, of course.

Reading the summary, I was expecting more about the flying part and to be honest I couldn't really feel Poppy's joy. This needs to be more descriptive I think, but that was just my suggestion. But I guess the scene itself was too short to show Poppy's joy. On the other hand I enjoyed reading the part where Nathan actually confessed and I found it really cute. Maybe it was a bit cliche but I love it nonetheless :D

I'm not going to say anything about grammar because it's not my forte (and I'm not naturally an English speaker so yeah...). All in all, I actually like this story and yes I said 'actually' because I rarely read short stories. Thank you for writing and I apologize if this is not long enough ^^;;


Author's Response: It took me a while to understand who you were :P I'm not very good at describing flying that well so I understand that. I also had a lot of fun writing for Nathan. Thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by Kat Promises, Promises

26th December 2010:
Herrow! Now forgive me if this is a bit choppy or anything because I'm reviewing this story from my iPod Touch (first time ever). Now I'm actually listening to Owl City right now and pleased to say that I love your story! It flows along with the song which is exactly what I am looking for. At first, I thought it was about Poppy as a young adult, but I quickly realized that she was still a student at Hogwarts. I haven't read many stories about her younger than well whatever age she is in the books, but this was done marvelousy. The relationship made me 'aw!' Well done! This story was great, and I am really glad that you decided to do the challenge. Not too much longer until the results are up. ~Kat

Author's Response: thanks and btw she is a young adult in this she's an apprentice and I loved writing it. Also I got an iPod touch too :O small world. :D Thanks for reviewing

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