2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by closetgeek Nerves

31st December 2010:
Great start! The plot looks really good and your character interactions are awesome. Make sure you pay attention to grammar and punctuation though- things like you're vs. your. Just do some extra proofreading and you should be alright!

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Review #2, by OneSilverDoe Nerves

18th December 2010:
This is really good! Intriguing story! I like it! You should write more. (;

Author's Response: Thanks I'm working on it at the moment but it will still have to go through validation

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