Reading Reviews for Not Just a Bystander
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Review #1, by lala And then I became a pranking mastermind...

16th January 2018:
i find autumn so funny
i seriously laughed so hard when james threw himself off the chair

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Review #2, by EllieStrange And then I accidently became a thief...

22nd November 2017:
This is hilarious! Funniest first chapter to a fic I've read! Really glad to have stumbled upon this fic, and can't wait to read the rest of the story.

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Review #3, by HarryGinnyLove88 And then I have a merry Christmas...

9th October 2017:
Sequel??? I want more James and Autumn...

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Review #4, by BBHP And then I accidently became a thief...

15th May 2017:
Stumbled upon this in my search for something new and it. Is. Hilarious. I'm loving it so far!

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Review #5, by Lizzi And then I actually enjoy myself...

8th October 2016:
James is wonderful, and Autumn should really listen to him!

You might never read this, because it's been such a long time since this was published, but I just wanted to say that I think you're a fantastic writer, :)

Though I'm gonna be completely honest and say that it bothers me A LOT that Al seems to have ownership over the Invisibility Cloak? Like, if there is something that James would inherit from his father, since he's you know, the oldest son of Harry Potter, it's the cloak which has passed down in generations. For Albus to have it is just insulting, even if James stole the map, it still doesn't matter since the map only works in Hogwarts and would be shared amongst his siblings. sorry for the rant, but someone other James having the cloak is not okay for me.

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Review #6, by Kylee And then I have a merry Christmas...

3rd July 2016:
I realize how long its been, so I doubt you're even checking reviews at this point, but I feel the need to apologize for the fact that I've read this story like ten times and never left a comment before. So I'd just like to say, this is still my favorite story on this website and I love you for writing it.

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Review #7, by Feikus II And then I have a merry Christmas...

9th July 2015:
I loved the story! It was great and I couldn't stop reading, especially in the last few chapters. I would be a bit careful with punctuation and homophones, though. It's probably quite hard to keep track of with such a large story, but I would recommend keeping an eye on it. Still, plot wise, I never had a boring moment reading it. It was thrilling and upbeat, but not so much so that it got boring. It had mature aspects, that I think really contributed to the tale.
So, yes. The grammar could have done with a bit more attention, but otherwise, great!

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Review #8, by RShake And then I have a merry Christmas...

8th March 2015:
Really well done on this. Your introduction of her problems at home was subtle and I appreciate that you went down a more nuanced and realistic route rather than the usual abuse fic. It's good to see a fic dealing with confidence issues properly rather than a quick-fix boyfriend as well. I loved how utterly flawed all your characters were - and how it wasn't too based on the whole "famous parents" problems that they usually are. And I'm glad it's completed so that I could read it all in one go :) Well done!

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Review #9, by MissMoneypenny And then I am reminded why people confuse me...

7th December 2014:
(dom is confusing me but blimey, james - she should totally tap that)
(i hope this review is allowed)

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Review #10, by MissMoneypenny And then I accidently became a thief...

20th November 2014:
this is hILARIOUS extreme kudos to you love

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Review #11, by QkStephen And then I have a merry Christmas...

11th May 2014:
Loved the story. lol muggle studies brought me here

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Review #12, by Lex1999 And then I accidently became a thief...

13th March 2014:
Ahhh! James Potter! what would we do without him?
good story!

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Review #13, by moony4ever And then I have a merry Christmas...

24th December 2013:
Hey!! You are such a wonderful writer and I love all the stories you post here. I love how your characters always have huge problems instead of being perfect and happy. It makes them more real and relate able. This story was just as great as all the others I've read. I laughed at Autumn's silly impulses and rash decisions and felt her insecurity and troubles. James was so amazingly sweet and I just loved how much he cared. Dom seemed manipulative and evil but I actually pitied her because she was truthfully just desperate and scared. I thought the ending was so perfect and satisfying. Thanks for the great read :) Keep writing

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Review #14, by kayleefrank And then there is a deviation into toilet humour...

1st December 2013:
Dude, this was hilarious. My family thinks I'm crazy cuz I was laughing so bad. Thanks!

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Review #15, by HermioneeeGrangerrr And then I have a merry Christmas...

28th October 2013:
Well first off I'm suprised that others know about the game of cheat. Secondly I like how you ended it and thirdly I'm glad that everything turned out okay.

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Review #16, by HermioneeeGrangerrr And then there is quidditch (and quidditch related activities)...

28th October 2013:
Amazing writing! This is one of my favorite stories.

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Review #17, by maya And then there are shifts...

20th August 2013:
oh god no is he with another girl?! no no no no no no you cannot do this to me!

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Review #18, by ilovegeorgeweasly101 And then I am reminded why people confuse me...

11th August 2013:
Love this story! In fact I should be writing an essay right now but who cares! I love autumn and think she deserves way better than Dom. Dom is mean and selfish. Have her meet up with Rose or someone nice!


Clea :)

Author's Response: YEAH WHO CARES ABOUT ESSAYS. DOm is kind of messed up... but she's not a bad person. It's... complicated and stuffs. Good luck with your essay!
Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #19, by cathilde And then I have a merry Christmas...

15th July 2013:
I read this about a year ago and I've just finished rereading now. I really enjoyed the story and humor and I think Autumn character is really well developed. I absolutely loved the dialogue, especially between Autumn and James, though the bit between Dom and Autumn in the broom closet is awesome! The only negative thing I found with this fic is there's quite a lot of spelling mistakes, especially in the earlier chapters, though they might seem like more than they are to me 'cause I read them all in practically one go (yay for the substenance of hot chocolate!!). Anyway, I think it's a fantastic fic and I'm probably going to read all your other stuff pretty soon!

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Review #20, by harrietm And then I have a merry Christmas...

5th July 2013:
Thank you so much for writing such a brilliant story!! You had me hooked right from the very beginning, and reading like crazy to the end. A real cyber page-turner! Loved the characters, the pranks, the humour, and of course the romance :) :)
The only thing I would say is that occasionally there would be slip ups with words that sound the same but are there, their and they're; your and you're; and heal and heel. Oh and mixing up anecdote and antidote! But none of these stopped the whole thing from reading very well and overall having very few mistakes :) So thanks again and I look forward to seeing anymore stories you write!

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Review #21, by ilovegeorgeweasly101 And then I accidently became a thief...

30th June 2013:
I like it. Sorry I'm not very good at reviews haha. I Justine that for once the heroine is thought of as not funny. It seems like they're always funny, and it's because she's not that I find her amusing. I can't wait to keep reading!



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Review #22, by Jenna And then I accidently became a thief...

31st May 2013:
One chapter down and I am hooked. I love the protagonist, hilarious inner monologue (I suppose you'd call it). Can't wait to continue reading :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Jenna! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :)

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Review #23, by Deedaltz And then I accidently became a thief...

26th May 2013:
I have been reading hp fanfic for over a year now and this is the first time I have decided to review. I loved this chapter and couldnt' keep a smile off my face. Your characters have great personalities, I cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hey Deedaltz! very honoured to recieve your first review and thank you VERY much for the lovely compliments! It's been a pleasure to make you smile :)

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Review #24, by CHAS And then further complications arise...

22nd May 2013:


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Review #25, by bubzi And then we talked...

21st May 2013:
I love this story... it's funny and really well written!

Author's Response: Thanks, bubzi! SO gld you liked it :D

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