This is so cute! I absolutely love how overdramatic Becca is. I think this was a great introduction to the story and I'm super excited to read the next chapter. Report Review
update soon plz... enjoying it till now, i really wanted to see something with Al but i guess its too soon rite... anywho, plz update, i am a fan of Al Report Review
Really good cant wait for the is second is chapter. isAuthor's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked it and the second chapter is on its way! Thanks for taking the time to review, it means a lot to me! :) Report Review
“My life is one big pot of meaningless soup"
my favorite line ever:)
update soon please!
10/10Author's Response: Hahaha, yesss, I'm glad you liked that line! I have no idea where on earth it came from, but it sounded funny, so I threw it in there, haha. Thanks for reviewing, and the next chapter is on its way! Report Review
Great first chapter, I can't wait to read more. Becca is awesome! :)Author's Response: YAY!!! You like Becca! That is good. She's a little crazy, I know, but in a very likable way (I hope). Thanks so much for taking the time to review - it means the world to me! Report Review
Ha! Loved it. Really clever-funny, not stupid. I really enjoyed reading it, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
10/10Author's Response: Yay, thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it. I was worried about my attempts at humor, so I'm glad it came across well. Next chapter is on its way! :) Report Review
That was great! You're writing is so funny and sarcastic - I love it :)
Oh, and FYI, I hope this review succeeds in making the world twirl round and round and round :DAuthor's Response: Yay, first review!!! *does happy dance*
Thank you so much for your review! The second chapter is on the way ... and, yes, your review made the world twirl round and round and round, so thank you for reviewing because you totally did the world a favor ;) Report Review
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