AWWW. :( Petunia is regretting some stuff here. I'm sad now. But that's kind of the point, sooo...Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sorry it made you sad, even though you are right, it kind of is the point...
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I really like this, I have never seen a story in which petunia talks about how her sister has everything and she just wants to be like lilly. Everytime I re-read the series I hope petuniawill come around for harry and I am sadly left hoping over and over.. Anyways Awesome job~!Author's Response: Thank you so much :D Report Review
A very nice one shot. Though I think you might have been able to do abit more with it. I like to think that after what you said at the end, dispite everything Petunia really loved her sister no matter what. I don't know if that was what you were trying to convey. I give you 10/10.Author's Response: Thank you.
I felt the ending was important because the books never seemed to reveal anything about Petunia. I definitely wanted to show how she loved Lily deep down inside. To me she always seemed jealous and tried to cover that up with hatred (maybe I've been reading too much fanfiction ;)).
Thank you so much. I love your reviews and ratings. I'm glad you seem to like many of my stories. Thank you!!! Report Review
Awesome one-shot. Full points for this.Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is one of my favorite stories I've written. Report Review
This is really interesting :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
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