This. is. amazing.
Sorry, I'm still in shock from over-exposure to
I've never read a Luna/Dean before, but I think I
officially ship them now! This was so fantastic!! I
really, really love that, as you said in the story,
here Luna isn't just "Loony Lovegood", she's a
woman, a friend, a lover... just WOW!
This is just written so perfectly and all the emotions
here are conveyed beautifully; this is a wonderfully
well-written piece and I ADORE IT!
10/10, absolutely perfect!!Author's Response: Aww hi Jayde! I'm so excited you stopped by!
I'm glad I could be the one to introduce you to Luna/Dean. I have another one-shot up about them called For You, My Love (15+)...you should check it out if you want more of the ship! And shadowycorner has a great Dean/Luna story started too. Highly recommend it :)
I'm so happy you like Luna! To me, she did seem a bit different in this than she was in the books, but I'm happy you took that as a sign of maturity instead of just bad characterization :P I wanted to show a more feminine, relatable side to her.
Thanks again! This made my day! :) Report Review
It's Delia here from the review tag :)
So, this one shot was really good. I've never read Dean/Luna before, but I think you did a brilliant job. Also, I loved your characterization of Luna. She's such a difficult character to capture and I think you did it right.
There is a bit where I don't think during the kiss that Luna would've thought that, or that the kiss would've happened like that, but other than that, it was just about perfect.
~DeliaAuthor's Response: Hey, thanks for coming by! This is my first ever story, and I like to think my writing has improved since then :) But I'm glad you liked Luna, because I was kind of apprehensive about writing her. And I get what you mean about the kiss; it was a little intense, wasn't it?
Thanks again for reviewing! I really appreciate your time :) Report Review
This was a great story- I've never read a Luna/dean fanfic and it was really something!
10/10. :)Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it...this is my first story, so it's pretty dear to my heart :) Thanks for coming by! Report Review
- Hufflepuff review tag -
Nice story :D
I could hear Luna's voice in my head as I read... meaning that I think you did a good job on her character. I really like Luna but hasn't had the courage to write something with her in it (because I'm afraid that I would butcher her)... but this one is good. I can fell Luna's light and easygoing aura... It's just like her.
Luna and Dean... I've never considered that before, but it does sounds plausible, given the time they spent together in the Malfoy Manor, Shell Cottage, and afterward. I like how the relationships started from 'just another boy in the hallway'. :D
And thank you for reminding me that Dean is a great artist!
The flow's good and it's well written.
I enjoy reading it very much :D
-Gray-Author's Response: Hi! Thank you SO much for this! Ohmygoodness I'm so glad you decided to review this story, since I haven't gotten too much feedback on it. This is so exciting!!
Sorry...I'm calm now, promise ;)
I'm so glad you like Luna! I was kind of afraid to write her too...she is definitely a challenge :) But it's really good to hear that my Luna has the carefree voice I was going for.
Luna/Dean is one of my favorite pairings ever...I just love the thought of them together. I'm glad it seems believable for you here :)
Thank you so much for the awesome review! You just made my day! :D
--Maggie Report Review
I've always wanted to see Luna and Dean to get together! This is perfect!
10/10 :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know it's shameful that I've taken this long to respond, but I'm really glad you liked it :) Report Review
Number 1: I've never read a Luna/Dean fic and this was outstanding
Number 2: I love the way you mapped out her feelings. it made me all warm because it felt so real
Number 3: I wanted to read more. Maybe you could write more?
Number 4: I don't understand why there hasn't been many other reviews because it was fabulous. I guess people are more wrapped up with other characters (guilty)
Number 5: I'm glad this caught my eye because it's the best one shot I've ever read (yes, even better than mine) Loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it. Now I'm a Luna/Dean believer 10/10, maybe an 11Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I wasn't sure if many people would read this because Dean/Luna isn't exactly a popular ship, but I'm glad you decided to share your opinion with me.
I hadn't planned on adding to this, but now I'm actually considering it. Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
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