Sniff, sniff. Update?Author's Response: Aww *dabs away tears guiltily*
Unfortunately everything is on hold until at least the new year due to massive amounts of school work. I hope you stick around til then! Report Review
I'm still here and waiting! :D And by the way, that was entirely Google translate. The only one I actually KNEW was 'por favor'. Spanish!Author's Response: Hiya! Updates are gonna be super slow cus of my insane workload, but hopefully I'll have plenty of time in the new year, so stick around! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
UPDATE! Please. Por favor. S'il vous plaît. Bitte. Praesent. Ie doi thoil. Per favore. Tafadhali. Vennligst. How many languages do I have to say this in?!?!?!Author's Response: MEGALOL! For a moment I actually thought you were typing in another language, and I wa slike... 'Hmmm, an international reader. how the HELL am I supposed to respond to this?'
Anyways, now that we'r back in English, I'll be updating soon-ish, I'm just struggling a bit becaue my laptop is broken and I've lost all my documents for a few days - as soon as it's fixed I'll be posting away! So keep an eye out XD
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That was really good, very well written. Please continue, I'd love to know what happens next and, If it's possible, I'd love for you to go into James' Point Of View, if only for a few paragraphs.
Thank you, and please upload soon!
-IAmFredAuthor's Response: I'm about halfway through writing the next chapter now, and, weirdly enough, a lot of it is from James' POV! I'm really glad you liked it, and I hope you like the next chapter too. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Update! Update! Update!
I absolutely love your story and you really have to update soon, I'm sure there's lots of people out there wishing the same thing as me...
I want to see what happens to Mini...I WANT TO SEE IT NOW!
Please update soon.
10/10 :)Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you liked it so much! I'm full in to exam chaos at the moment, so I can't promise a fast update, but on the other hand I seem to do some of my best writing when it's to put off revising, so who knows? Keep an eye out, either way.
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Wow, just reading the first few chapters of this story I've fallen in love with it. From the summary, I thought it was going to be just another boring OC story, but you've made it so original and your character has so much depth. I can't wait to read more, please post soon!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm truly dreadful at summaries, but I'm glad you mad eit past that because this really is one of my favourite stories at the moment XD
I'm in love with Mini, lol, don't tell anyone XD Report Review
A beautiful chapter, the whole harsh-weather-sleeping idea is brilliant! This was really sad, and cute, and OH GOD I LOVE THIS. 1000/10, I can't wait for another chapter! This story is amazing.Author's Response: Thanks! I have no idea where any of this comes from but I have to say Mini is my favourite character to write by far. I think I'm in love with her XD Report Review
What a fabulous chapter! You have done a great job of making Mini seem a glowing light in the dark world of Muggle London. The tone is perfect for the subject matter and you draw the reader in through the character and the writing. My only criticism is that the chapters are a little short. But they still work well so ignore that complaint.
I cannot wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Aww, thanks, that's such a good way of putting it! This is such lovely review, I'm so glad you liked it. I know my chapters can be quite short, but I get my inspiration in short bursts, so... Still, it is something I'm trying to work on, never fear XD
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I like how the story has the sense of being a fairy tale because that seems to fit Mini well.Author's Response: Thanks, that's kind of exactly what I was going for XD Report Review
This is a wonderful story!
Thank you for sharing it. Gotta love the girl. This last chapter was incredible, I really loved reading it. Her fantasy world is so creative, intriguing and ...it's refreshing. You have a way with words. I really enjoyed all the chapters.
I wonder what she's like at Hogwarts and what James will do now that she caught his attention.Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! I don't know where any of this came from but Mini's whole world fascinates me. She's such a great character to write. The next chapter should be up soon, so keep an eye out! Report Review
Your first two chapters have already proved to me that this is going to be an amazing story! I love that Minnaloushe, unlike most of the "strange, weirdo" characters we get on here, is actually quite talkative, well as talkative as she can be, instead of being so reserved that we learn very little about her. Once again, your descriptive talents are perfectly brilliant. I can't wait for another chapter.Author's Response: Thanks so much! Minnaloushe is one of my favourite characters to write at the moment, she's just so odd, and like you say quite talkative! I'm playing around a lot with description at the mo, so I'm glad you liked that too.
Thanks for reviewing! The next chapter is in the queue now XD Report Review
AMAZING story!!! I really like Minnalouse, shes quite likable and very believable. Can't wait till the next chapter =)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm having a lot of fun writing this. The next chapter is in the queue now, so keep an eye out! Report Review
I really adored the first chapter and I'm happy to say that it's the same with this chapter.
Your writing has an ethereal and wonderfully flowing touch to it and it's lovely and refreshing to read.
:)Author's Response: Thanks so much! That might be the nicest way anybody has ever described my writing XD
This is quite different to the stuff I normally write, so I'm having a lot of fun playing around with it. Report Review
I like Minnaloushe, she's different from the typical OC's in next gens. She's definitely strange, but in her own quirky way.
Update soon!Author's Response: Thanks! I love writing strange characters, but I was getting a bit sick of all the clumsy, sarcastic, supposedly 'outcast' girls who are only interested in getting a boyfriend that appear in so many stories, so I thought I'd try somehting different, and I have to say it's a lot of fun. Report Review
Nice start. Just a little short on detail though. Maybe add some of how the characters are feeling during this time. A little more about the characters would let this have some more impact. Just a thought.
Good job all in all.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I know it's quite short and vague, but I really just wanted to try out the characters a bit and see what kind of responses I got before the story really began XD
There will be much more detail in future chapters.
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she sounds strange, lol. can't wait for more, sounds like a really neat story!Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Look out for updates soon XD Report Review
I quite like Minnaloushe. I love this kind of first chapter, it's so intriguing and I'm definitely excited for the next chapter.
Lovely description and imagery, by the way.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks. More will happen int he next chapter, this was really jsut a nothingness - sort of an introduction to Mini, I guess. I'm experimenting with being more descriptive, so I'm glad you picked up on it XD Report Review
this sounds really good :) update soon !Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad everyone seems to like this XD Report Review
I like it.
That's all I can say about it.
Update again soon :)Author's Response: Ooh, intruiged is good, means you'll keep reading XD
I'm rubbish at updates, but hopefully it won't be too long. Th enext chapter will be a lot longer, so you'll probably have more to say about that! Report Review
I love this so far. You have some amazing imagery there! Really great similes and metaphors, can't wait for the next installment!Author's Response: Wow, thanks, I'm experimenting with descriptions and stuff so it's nice to get some positive comments about it. Report Review
You have a real talent for description, and I like the anecdotal feel of the first chapter here. I really like when things are implied rather than stated, and you gave an excellent impression of her personality here, despite it being a short chapter. I cannot wait to see more :)Author's Response: Oh, wow, thanks! I'm doing a lot of experimenting in my descriptions here, tryign to settle into a style I guess, so it means a lot to get such nice feedback about it! Mini's character is certainly very strong, and will develop a lot over the course of this story, so I'm glad you got a sense of her so early on.
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please can yuh update?Author's Response: Just did XD Report Review
That was really short, but I can see adding more would have ruined it as a prologue of sorts. Sounds very interesting, keep writing!Author's Response: Yeah, I originally had loads written but decided to split it up so this could be more of an introduction. I know it's really short, but bear with me, the next chappie is much longer!
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OMG this is sooo good :O
update pleas? :)Author's Response: Glad you liked it! More soon XD Report Review
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