*giggles* does albus like her? ;)
Anyways it's a good story! I think its pretty cool hehe.
Update! :D Report Review
Oh boy, fantastic couple in the making. I'm really enjoying this story so far. Can't wait for the next update! xx Report Review
omg omg omg ok breathe ryan breathe. ok im better! haha! i was sooo excited with this story and it is turning out so good. i cant wait yo find out what happens next so ypu need to update like asap ok?? haha but great job and aww i cant wait for the romance of nattie and al! yay! ok bi bi!
ps- yes my name is ryan no i am not a guy! hahaAuthor's Response: Thank you!
I'll update as fast as I possibly can!
you have a very cool name, nice and unique :) Report Review
is scorpius upset that everyone knows about him and rose?
-sarahAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'll be getting more into that in the next chapter, so stick around to find out! Report Review
Wow, I really like this story, it's interesting. I am looking forward to where you take this. Please update soon.
NatalieAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
:O this is getting very interesting! can't wait for the next chapter :D I remember reading this story before, but I don't know why I didn't follow it! I definitely am now, though!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're interested in it :) Report Review
This is so great, I've read the story so far and seems cool and funny :)
"His name rhymes with Falbus. I just couldn't stop giggling at this ! Keep up the good work and update soon!!Author's Response: Thank you!
It was one of my favourites too when I was writing it :) Report Review
Good start- technical writing could use some improvement. You've got some really great sentences, like "My auburn hair is dishevelled and full of knots, I have circles under my crystal blue eyes from lack of sleep, and my whole face is set into a grumpy line due to it being morning. " but some others are unnecessary, like where you said it was sarcasm because it was already clear. Great job though!Author's Response: Than you very much! I'll definitely watch out for that :) Report Review
I really like this so far :D
Can't wait to see more of Nattie! And of course, I'm looking forward to see what happens this year. When did that first scene take place? At the end of the year?Author's Response: Thank you! You'll definetly be seeing more of Nattie soon! I guess I should have put a date on the first part..I did now. It's at a party during the summer.
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