6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Hopeless 03: A FAMILY

23rd February 2011:
Hello Brenda! another nice chapter, love the family interaction and like all families they have their issues. Great job working that into your story.
Looking forward to the next one...
~Colleen

Author's Response: Thank you... I try to show the family how they would naturally be. Yes they all have their issues, but their issues are appropriate for their age, and so is how they react to them. I'll post the next chapter as soon as I have time.

Once again, thanks for reading.

Brenda(g)P ^O-O^


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Review #2, by Hopeless 02: HOME OF A [NOT SO] HERO

31st January 2011:
I would like to see a bit of a lighter note now and then. Perhaps write a bit about when happy things happened. The angsty Harry can be so annoying and you write him so well LOL
Nice job!

Author's Response: There will be some happiness coming up... but you are right, most of the story deals with the darkness that the characters (in this case Harry) deal with every day. I'm sorry I'm being so Grimm.

Haha, I didn't mean him to be so annoying. He does seem to get out of control sometimes , but at least I'm glad he's believable as an angsty, self-loathing, douche...

Thank you for reading, and for your comments... so far you're the reader who's posted the most on this story (2 post :))

Brenda(g)P ^O-O^


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Review #3, by Hopeless 01: A SHADOW AND A NIGHTMARE

31st January 2011:
Certainly not cannon, but I enjoyed it very much. I also like the idea of a bunch of short stories.

Thank you for taking the time to write this!

~Hopeless

Author's Response: No, not cannon. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, I enjoyed writing it. I'm not sure why I'm writing them in short stories, sort of like Vignettes of the Harry Potter world after the war.

Hope you enjoy the rest of this, there's actually not that many more chapters left, but they are all written and I will post them as soon as the website will allow me to.

Brenda(g0P ^O-O^


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Review #4, by Hopeless Prologue: A History of Chaos

31st January 2011:
Hi Brenda! Great summary and very well written. One thing though you write ... only the final and seventh piece of soul remained within Voldemort himself. What about the piece that was in Harry?
Looking forward to the next two chapters! ~Colleen

Author's Response: Wow... big overlook with the Horcruxes on my part. Thank you for noticing, I feel like I should fix that, but there would be too much to add to the prologue, maybe one day.

Thanks for the comment, I really enjoyed writing this, I have to admit it made me sad for Harry when I wrote this.

Thanks once again for reading, hope you enjoy the rest.

Brenda(g)P ^O-O^


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Review #5, by Godrics_Helm 02: HOME OF A [NOT SO] HERO

29th January 2011:
I really like this story. I think you describe Harry's pain of not letting go of Ron really well. I'm interested in how Hermione's coping with Ron's death and i hope you include her in the next chapter.

Author's Response: thank you so much for your comment... The Idea of losing someone so close to you, is heart breaking. I think most people would not deal with it very well... yes eventually you would learn in your own way how to deal with the pain, and Harry has his own way.

As for Hermione, this story is not very long, it has to do more with Harry, his pain and his family, unfortunately I can tell you we will hear from her, but she will not be making an appearance until the next installment which I have already started to write.

thank you once again for your comment.

Brenda(g)P ^O-O^


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Review #6, by Kt 01: A SHADOW AND A NIGHTMARE

23rd December 2010:
I like this story keep it up plz:)

Author's Response: Thank you... Its actually all finished, will post them as fast as I'm allowed to.

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