wow, that was great. I hadn't even thought of Harry using the Elder wand to fix the castle. What I thought about was maybe that since the castle was magic anyway it would fix itself. I think your idea works better, it's almost a way for him to have closure with what happened. I like my idea for my story, I'd never use anyone else s' but the whole thing was wonderful is the point :) I'd love to read more. And great banner too, I haven't even made an official screen name yet, but I'm going to :) anyway, great job again! Report Review
OMG LOVE IT PLEASE WRITE MORE! QUICKLY!
Lots of Love,
~Sal~Author's Response: thank you! i'll be updating as soon as i can! it's so frustrating that they don't let you have more than one chapter up for validation at a time.. lol Report Review
Oh, that was great. A lovely start. I love your title and banner. Happy Christmas and update soon!Author's Response: thank you! i was pretty anxious starting out with such a depressing chapter since i want this story to be happy overall, but i mean... gotta follow what happened :-) thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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