Reading Reviews for The Ace of Hearts
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by mischief manage Three Months Earlier

1st October 2013:
Keep writing please its really good dont be discouraged by the lack of reviews. want to keep reading!

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Review #2, by LilyandJames4ever Present Day

23rd February 2011:
Clever! I like it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks!!! And thank you for taking the time to review!!!

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Review #3, by Kenzie Black Present Day

27th January 2011:
I love it!(: UPDATE SOON!(:

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you love it. Next chapter is on its way!

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Review #4, by RawrItsMe Present Day

4th December 2010:
So very good! Can't wait until the next chapter!!

-Cat. x

Author's Response: Thanks! And thankyou for your review. The next chapter should be along shortly, its just in validation. :)

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Review #5, by burning_sunshine Present Day

4th December 2010:
awesome start : ) Can't wait for more..

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. More is on its way. The next chapter is written just waiting to be validated!

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Review #6, by tay Present Day

3rd December 2010:
a bit short, but good so far. Keep going! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry I was just so excited to get it out and it just seemed to end well, the next chapter is written so you won't have to wait long. So glad you like it. Thank you for your review!

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Review #7, by kaileena_sands Present Day

3rd December 2010:
I like the beginning of this story. The whole situation reminds me a lot of the time when Lily broke up Robyn and Barney's relationship in How I met your mother. Anyway... nice start, I hope you'll follow it through. I'd like to see more ;)

P.S. There are some minor spelling problems here and there - like "Coneiving" instead of conniving. Nothing major though, I am just pointing out.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you like it so far. I was worried that this would be complete garbage. And yes the idea was from watching HIMYM, i decided to majorly twist it up though I just really liked the idea of Lily breaking up Ted's gfs and her sneaky ways. But my story will be completely different and i hope you'll like it. I think i rushed with trying to get this out i was so excited but thank you for pointing out those mistakes i will have to fix them. :)

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