Haha i think this is one of the best opening chapters i've read! Hehe their sexual tension is just screaming to be let out! lmao! on to chapter two:) Report Review
im just wondering, what did James steal from Lily? love it btw!Author's Response: thanks! haha and I like to think he went into her makeup and swapped some things with joke products and messed some stuff up heehe Report Review
I like their development into friends- and it's blatantly obvious that he fancies her!Author's Response: thanks a bunch! Report Review
Yayy you updated!!:) loved this chapter! update soon!Author's Response: thanks! it's in the works, almost done :) Report Review
chapter 4? please? this is good! Report Review
Yayy! It's beautifully written and made me laugh- several times. Get more chapters up! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! It's the queue *sigh* Report Review
Aw...so cute! ILOVE SCORPIUS!!! I love how he teases rose about her loveing him...:)
Update soon! :)
-SARAHAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I have much of it written, the queue is a pain :( Report Review
Hahaha! This chapter was sooo funny!!
cant wait 2 read more!
-SARAHAuthor's Response: Thanks a bunch! Report Review
I like it :) but I don't recognize the last name carton?Author's Response: :) thanks! It's from a Tale of Two Cities! Report Review
good chapter, though they could be longer?
is this going to be a long or short fic?Author's Response: I'm trying to make it longer, this was just a relatively short chapter :) Report Review
this is really good :) please update some more of it!Author's Response: :) Thanks! The editors have been on holiday but I've updated, just waiting for the queue :) Report Review
hiya. i thought you could use a review. hold the topless scenes. 2 in one chapter is a tad much.
the grammar is also a bit off in places.
i think someone needs a beta :]. haha or that's just me being desperate for some fanfic involvement.
i think we should also work a little on the story summary. the chapter summary is good, though. in case you didn't notice, this is me inviting myself into the fanfic writing process. feel free to ignore.
I'm bored. I don't want to do Joint Stock.
My parents brought home Amir's for lunch.
-RoxyAuthor's Response: HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA Hi I laughed out loud reading this. I think this is all valid. I'm sorry that Joint Stock is boring, we're here just chillin harhar. I'm currently in the midst of writing chapter 2. I'll send it to you and you can be my beta! Yay!
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