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Review #1, by hdawg Endless Devotion

4th January 2011:
This is a great one shot :) it would be great as a chaptered story, to get a lot more of the action in there and to find out more about Ellie. But you really got the emotion in here, even in just under 1100 words :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the idea! I've been trying to write the next chapter, but I honestly don't know where to start so I might just keep it as a One-Shot

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Review #2, by hpffisawesome Endless Devotion

4th December 2010:
Nice job for your first one-shot! Really deep and emotional, you did a good job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!

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