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Review #1, by Madam moony Chapter Two: Exceptionally Uncharacteristic

10th June 2011:
James was headboy every one knows that

Author's Response: Lol, you are correct, everyone does know that, including myself. However, I decided to give things a twist, and have him become Head Boy in a much less traditional way. If you read on to the later chapters I've posted, he does indeed become Head Boy, but I won't spoil the fun and tell you why or how it happens, should you chose to continue with my story.

Thanks for your review, and I appreciate you pointing that out to me, incase I didn't know (:


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Review #2, by Author 12 Chapter Three: Shadows in the Distance

7th April 2011:
Great story so far! i'm really enjoying it. :) everyone seems to be talking very formally to each other but apart from that its a really engaging story. i can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Awww my first reviewer! Thanks so much for the review! And I'm still looking for a BETA for the story, so its a bit more raw then what I would normally post. I picture Lily, Patrick, and Remus all to be a bit more "sophisticated" and mature than the rest, but sometimes it translates into my dialouge being kind of monotonous in tone and dialect at times. I certainly appreciate you pointing this out, and I'm hoping this will be fixed once I do find a good BETA for the story.

Thanks again so much for your review, and my apologies it took so long for me to get back and post a new chapter or respond. I've been having some trouble in the real world, but hopefully everything is resolved now, and I should be back at it. Thanks again, for the tenth time (:


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Review #3, by leopard Chapter One: Home is Where Your Heartache Is

7th April 2011:
I really like this story and its very well written, I look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: Thank you very very much.

My apologies for taking so long to get back to you and post another chapter, but its coming soon I promise! I've got it all typed out, I just have to iron over a few things and wait for it to be validated!

Thanks again, and I hope you'll read more (:


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