Aww, this one is cute, too! I like how shy Audrey is, it suits this story.
(:Author's Response: thanks :) i liked trying out fics with different couples - glad you liked it :) Report Review
Aww I loved this! I really enjoyed reading this, I felt that the situation was really well written, and your characterisation of Ron and George, and in particular, Percy, were fantastically spot on and felt so real to me. I'm not that fond of Percy, but you made me see him in a completely different light. His perspective just felt so Percy and the way you wrote it kept me engaged and wanting to read on.
I love Audrey's shyness, and Percy's awkwardness when he's trying to buy the drink for Louise/Audrey. I loved Ron, George and Percy's conversation - about work, about Ron's love for Hermione, the chocolate frogs, everything really tied in so well.
I really think this is a wonderful one shot, and I really enjoyed reading it! Well written :) I especially love the absolutely amazing characterisation of Percy.
- charlotteAuthor's Response: thank you so much! there was meant to be more of audrey in this but i got a bit carrried away with the brothers' conversation :) so happy i helped you see percy differently as i always feel a bit sorry for him - thanks again! Report Review
X] That was so sweet!
I absolutely loved it~ You kept Percy in character very well, which is rather difficult to do, and I love the laid back theme.Author's Response: Thank you! getting percy right was my main focus, lol, so its great to hear that :D thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
Really cute :) Love itAuthor's Response: thank you :D Report Review
i loved this really cute :)Author's Response: thanks very much! im glad u liked it :) Report Review
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