Just let me start by saying that this is a very good start to a story, I really like the way that you portray your characters :)
though... I couldn't help but to pick on some mistakes (not too many, anyway i figured that either you'll dislike me for prodding on your baby or be thankful for the aid (which is the way i react so just wanted to help))
"Perculiar" - peculiar
"Teddy, does which house your in matter" - you're in (and it's the same mistake in the next line as well...)
"where'll go" - where you'll go
"to but him in Gryffindor"- to put him in Gryffindor?
"then as one got there robes on"- there is supposed to be their
"opened mouthed looking"- open mouthed
"as she was shoved into."- shoved into what? Should be shoved in or perhaps shoved into a boat
There not too much I hope but some of these troubled my reading and I think it'll be easier to read with just some of those tinytiny corrections :)
anyway great start to a story and it really makes me want to read more!
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