Wow! I love the chapter. It was very, very good. Oh, and I just wanted to comment on how much I love your banner, but the story is what makes it so great. :^)

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Who wishes they were in Slytherin?? Who wishes they were with that arrogant little git???Lily is soo misled sometimes...Poor her... 10/10

Author's Response: she loves Severus, I'd wanna be in Slytherin too :D

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Ohhh I loved thi
I hope that in the end there are some James and Lily scenes
Love them

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Aw. Fabulous chapter. I am flabbergasted by the excellent way you write. It reminds of the flow of words created in the books. Also, I adore your plotline, for it only gets more and more intriguing. Oh, and good timing for Valentine's Day. :^)

Author's Response: thank you so much. and yes, i wrote it a few weeks ago and it worked out perfectly. :D

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Haha. In an eww sort of way. I know I sound like an 11-year-old, but EW!!! Lily and Severus sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! Blech!!! I'm sorry... It was really good.

Author's Response: Yes I know. but im sure it happened so i put it in there. Thank you!

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Aw! I love these two even though I know how it all ends and how said it can be. But until the sadness I'll bask in the happiness and whatnot haha.

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Wow, I really love this story. The letter in this chapter was by far my favorite. I also adored the 'Disturbing' snowman. In all another lovely chapter. :^)

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Okey, I love all the different names Lily called James. Funny!

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I don't want Petunia's socks!! This story always makes me smile. I find it all very cute and entertaining.

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Another amazing chapter. This one showed your great creation of dialog. The conversations flowed perfectly. I'll be awaiting chapter four. :^)

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Great chapter. My favorite thing, that to me was pure genius, was Lily's confusion of James' name. Hilarious! Jason of Jeffrey. Loved it. :^)

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Interesting. Very interesting. I can't wait to see where you take this.

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This story is really moving along. I like how you write Lily.

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Good start. But did Petunia say her parents were proud that Lily was a witch?

Author's Response: I looked at that in many ways. At first though, I would think that the Evans felt unsure about the whole wizarding world, but soon came around, but in the beginning Lily just saw that the way she wanted to see it and felt as though they were scared of her because of how Petunia had acted. Also I would think Petunia was saying that because of her jelousy of Lily. But all in good time.

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Great Story:Keep writing because I am a sucker for Lilly and Severus fiction. Your style of writing is really good.

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love it i want to read more

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Aw, that's sad about Lily and her parents. This is the first time i read about Lily feeling feared by her parents. very original. Maybe make the chapters longer though.

Author's Response: Thanks alot and the chapters will probably vary but they should be getting longer.

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That's really good.
ALOT better than the crap that usually consumes this website.
KUDOS.

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I loved it and was horrified when the chapter reached its end. Please continue and finish, for this is a story which deserves completion. :^)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I do plan on finishing it :)

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