This is so good! I've been reading through your stories all night and I love every one. You're such a brilliant writer and it's lovely how you always seem to spend time to reply to every review you get. This is so sweet of a story and very believable. ^_^ Author's Response: Wow, right when I get a review about how great I am about replying to my reviews, I schluff off for more than a year and stop checking my account here! I really like replying to reviews though as I usually have a response to what people leave me! :)
I'm so honoured to know that you've read several of my stories! I know I'm not much next to several writers here on hpff, but I'm really glad you appreciate what I have written because I try to put my all into every story I write. (:
Also, I actually have a lot of insecurities about this story especially since Luna is one of my absolute favourite characters, and therefore I am so ecstatic to know you thought it was believable! And cute to boot!
Thank you so much for this review! You're incredibly lovely and I'm quite honored by your opinion. This has really made my day! (Just casually 8 months later.) Report Review
one of the best stories on this site. LUVED IT!Author's Response: Thanks! I personally feel that it's very low-par compared to many stories, but thanks for the compliment Report Review
Really good, but I can tell it was more rushed than your stories usually are. I like the storyline though, and the marriage certificate was a good idea :)Author's Response: Thanks! The storyline was a fit of inspiration that was something to be thankful for on Thanksgiving day. The marriage certificate thing was lack of any other idea.
Thanks for the review :) Report Review
i liked this. it was very sweet. Of course I thought that things just went too fast, but I still enjoyed it though. At the start I kinda thought she was dead or something... and Rolf seemed like jerk, although i actually like him. Maybe you could have written about George's feelings a bit more. How it felt for him to be there, watching her with Rolf. How it felt for him to chase after her and kiss her. Overall, it was still good :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I read my story again right after I read this and I realized that that's completely true. This story isn't very developed at all. So if you look at the summary, I put a note that says that I will be editing and polishing this in the future. How much can you expect from a rushed story? I don't know if I'll lengthen the story, because it is already quite long I think, but I will make sure that things progress more realistically. I started writing this story so that she was dead, like she'd committed suicide or been in an accident, but then I discovered that I liked this plot much more and I thought that the misleading beginning made the story better, I'm not sure if it did, but...yeah. I made Rolf out to be a jerk because I thought that it made my plot make more sense, I'm not sure if your applauding or critiquing my abuse of his character like that. I am planning on writing more of George's feelings in, but I read one of my earlier fics just before writing this and it was mostly about emotions and it was absolutely horrible. So I think that I was sort of wary about getting too into feelings with this fic, but seeing the final result, I realize that in order for my story to be the best it can be, I need to find the right balance. And lastly, thank you very much for reviewing and I'm glad you liked it overall, it makes my day to see reviews like this :) Report Review
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