It was truly amazing,dear. Please make a second chapter atleast
XOXO, Reader

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Wow. That's deep.
Please update soon! :)
There's so much... mysteriousness going on here. I need to know more!

Author's Response: aha thats me master of mystery.

I wrote this chapter on a whim. Just something that popped into my head.
I'm working on devloping the characters and clarifying the plotlines and hopefully getting a banner.

So next chapter will be out in a week tops.
Thank-you for reading and reviewing, it makes me soo much more motivated to write more.

-Irisa

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I loved it. Please update soon.

Author's Response: thank-you RosalieArianaWeasly
im glad you loved it
next chapter will be in the queue the second it opens.

-irisa

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sounds really good so far! and please don't abandon it, i'd really like to read more :)

Author's Response: Thank-you so much. Abandon it I will not.

I won't be able to get the next chapter in by queue closure unfortunetly. Its only about 50% done right now. But keep an eye out.

And thank-you for the reveiw, its what keeps me going.

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In the beginning it get's a little confusing - but seeing this is just the start, it can be forgiven. I liked the end - because you then know about who the main character person is talking/thinking about.. I want to read more. Curious how this will go on..

Author's Response: hey AngelNameless

first reveiw yay!

Yeah i've been told that i don't explain whtas going on in my head well. I guess its just a messy place. But i'm working on it. Hopefully i can get someone to read over it next time.

thankyou for reading and reveiwing it makes me smile.

-Irisa

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