I like it :D .. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)Author's Response: I'm trying to get it out ASAP, but Homework is taking over the world... thanks! Report Review
This is really good! However, there are a few typos. As the last reviewer said, you spelled Evans, Evens. Also, the first time you say Mr. and Mrs. McGonagall, you capitalize the and. I love the foreshadowing when she thinks about being deputy headmistress. Please write more ASAP!!
P.S. All of the above is true and completely unbiased.Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Report Review
First of all, I love the idea for this story! The synopsis really drew me in and I had to click it. It really stood out for me among the rest of the recent updated stories!
The only error, however, was one I found on the summary itself. It says 'Lily Evens' instead of 'Lily Evans' :) I didn't notice it at first, but it would be better if you corrected it for future readers!
All that being said, I'll be interested in continuing the story! You've got a great idea and I'm eager to see how it unfolds!Author's Response: Thank You! This really made my day. Also, thanks for the editing info. I'll change that spelling mistake ASAP. Report Review
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