This is so good! I love how you really get into the feeling of Cissy and how she feels, well... alone. Sometimes that's me. This is really sweet and I love it!Author's Response: Aww thank you so much!!! Glad you liked it :) Report Review
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Oh, this is a wonderful one-shot. I've always thought that Narcissa was exactly that - a shade of grey - neither pure evil, but not making a stand for good either. You've described her per-fect-ly.
Just one correction - the sentence "I had already said good-bye to her parents…and my sisters…" - her parents? Either it's "my parents" or it's just a bit confusing.
But anything else - wow. Really nice. Keep up the good work. Cheers :)Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :) Yeah, I know what you mean. I always pictured her as a little lost and caught in between. And like one day I randomly thought of the whole "once upon a time there were three sisters." thing. :P
Oh thanks for pointing that out. I changed the story from third to first person-must've missed that.
Glad you liked it and thanks for the review :) Report Review
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