Hey! I was browsing the Recently Added Stories, so I'll review this now. A bit of a preemptive strike, if you know what I mean. Anyways, interesting choice of a character! I can't wait to see what Gilderoy drinks that disagrees with him :) Now for some CC: I'd consider getting a beta, so they can look over the story for proofreading it. That was the only thing really that stood out to me. Another thing, but not as important, is the dialogue format. That could be improved on as well. Overall, really excited to see where you go with this story! :)Author's Response: :o? not quite sure what you mean, but yes a beta would probably be a good idea. Thanks! Report Review
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