This was interesting! I would definitely recommend a bit more details,and a little bit more characterization! But you should be proud of it! Good job!!(:Author's Response: Hi there :)
This was one of my first stories so I will say that I wasn't quite sure how to incorporate such things at the time. But thank you for pointing that out and I'm glad that you liked it.
~webeta123 Report Review
Hey there I'm playing a bit of review tag!
What was the quote you were given? I'm a little confused about that otherwise I thought it was pretty good. Funny, and weird but good!
x ElyAuthor's Response: heyy. The quote was, "Tigers hate pepper. They love cinnamon." Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
What I find really interesting about this story is Del's unique trait. However, it confuses me at the same time as I don't get the meaning of being a natural animagi because I thought being an animagi is something you have to work on and unless you have the talent you won't be one or something, so maybe, just at least for me, could you explain it?
Oh but anyway, great idea. This is for a challenge, I suppose? I especially like the last part where Del accidentally transformed and almost assaulted others (based on her inner thought) but at the end she actually act more like a tiger, a cute one even.However once again, I couldn't find the connection between the summary and this story. Actually, it's more like the third sentence of your summary. It sort-of implied something about this one-shot will tell us about the story of how Del eventually hates cinnamon or something along the line instead of showing that Del already hates cinnamon. Once again, that's just a thought.
Oh and James, I just love your foolishness sometimes.
Thank you for writing again! :D
~GoAuthor's Response: For this story, I really needed Del to be an animagi but considering she's a third year it would be extremely difficult for her to register and learn, so that was the only way she would have this ability. Think of her animagus skill like Remus's lyncanthropy(sp?). And yes this was for a challenge. I should say that I fail at writing summaries so that is why there isn't a very good connection between the story and summary. Yes, James is often very foolish :)
And thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Oh and I thought that I would inform you that the quote was from The Hangover.
~KatAuthor's Response: oh...i haven't watched that movie Report Review
I know I am so late in reviewing this, but I must say that I loved it!!! Very nice!! I wasn't sure what was gonna happen, but I really super duper enjoyed it!!
~KatAuthor's Response: hi! i'm glad you enjoyed it Report Review
Hi webeta123, I loved the story. I often thought from other peoples stories that the marauders were getting a bit to big for their boots. I loved the tigress bit. But I need you to give me a clue as to what the movie Quote was?. Apart from that though I have to give you 10/10 for the originality of the story.Author's Response: thanks for the rating! also I'm sorry but i have zero clue where the quote is from. I just used it in my story :P Anyway thanks! Report Review
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