I loved the way you portrayed Ron!:D loved,loved,loved it! I usually hate Ron,but I was delighted by this! Short and sweet! Perfect! Good job, I wish I could read more(:Author's Response: Hi there :)
I'm glad you enjoyed Ron's portrayal. I was slightly worried about it, so I'm glad you liked him and thank you for the review :)
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I really like your story it is very creative and imaginative and interesting!Author's Response: Thank you for the review :D
Among the three stories, this is actually my favourite. I love Ron and his struggles which looks really real to me and I can just imagine how it would be, etc. He's just Ron and when your would-be partner is a Hermione Granger, I suppose it'll be hard to arrange your words.
I especially love the last paragraph which I think is the highlight of this one-shot. My only complaint is just this is too short (because I usually read longer stories) but anyway, just ignore me. Once again I apologize for the short comment and thank you for writing! :D
Looking forward for more of your stories :)
~GoAuthor's Response: Yeah, I had a lot of fun writing Ron's inability to arrange his words :P.
Thank you for reviewing and I'm looking forward to your upcoming reviews! Report Review
I really enjoyed this, it was short but sweet and well written, my only criticism is, to me personally, Ron seems very out of character in the way he says things and also the things he says (but thats just a personal thing, and nothing on your writning) Thanks for writing this for my challenge, again I really enjoyed it :D
HarryFanForeverAuthor's Response: I was trying to keep true to the song itself though i can c that he was a bit OOC. I'm glad that u made the challenge i had fun writing for it Report Review
aw, I love it! this is so cute! I can totes see ron acting this way too! Perfectly him actually.Author's Response: i had so much fun writing this with ron! thanks for the review! Report Review
very cute! quick but good emotions :)Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review Report Review
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