Love this story :D x
Glad you wrote it :D xAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! :D Report Review
I read this entire story today and it was amazing. I really loved it. Your character development was great, the plot and the scenes were woven well together, and the scenes and descriptions were brilliant overall. I really enjoyed reading this story a lot, and even put it up in the Recommendations thread (at the forums)!!
I suggest however that you add in Action/Adventure to the Genre for the story :)
Overall, this was a very nice read & I really liked it!
ADAuthor's Response: Oh wow, thank you! If you liked this, I would definitely check out Grazed Knees. It's much longer and apparently good. Thank you very much! :D Report Review
I only just finished this and it is amazing!! i am going to start radiant soon cuz it sounds so good!! great job on this!Author's Response: Thank you much! Don't forget to check out The Lightning Strike, as well. It's a sort of prequel to Radiant. I hope you enjoy! Report Review
I really really really like this story. So much, that I even went to read the sequel before coming back to write this review. Which, now that I think about it, doesn't make any sense at all. But that's beside the point.
Overall, I really liked how you were able to incorporate the fact that in the beginning Draco and Hermione had to keep up the pretense of hating each other, and when it finally got out, how everyone turned on them. A lot of other Dramoines don't have that, and it makes the story too lovey dovey, to fairy-tale like. So I really enjoyed reading your story. Stayed up half the night reading it, and the sequel. ^.^
Thanks so much for writing such an awesome story. :D Author's Response: :D Well, I'm glad you did like it!
Awh, thank you!
Yea, I've read a lot where Harry and Ron just decide to like Draco as soon as they get together, and it's just weird. It wouldn't happen.
Thank you very much! Report Review
I don't usually comment in the middle of chapters, but this last scene just made me laugh. It was like deja vu, first with Draco, then with McGonagall. I really enjoy your story. :D
I think that your writing is really wonderful. There are times when I feel like you could have added a little more detail, yet at the same time, the lack of details allows more freedom for the imagination, so I don't know which one I like better. ^.^Author's Response: :D Thank you!
I'm so, so happy you've enjoyed this story and Radiant. Thank you very, very much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Wonderful story! I love it!Author's Response: Thank you much! Report Review
Wow, this story is really good! You've done Dramione in a very tasteful and original way :D and I loved the plot as well, although when Hermione missed her period I was like oh no is this going to be one of those cliché 'oh no I'm pregnant' stories, but then it wasn't so I was like yay good twist! Haha great story, and I will probably read the sequel and sequel prequel(?) soon ish :DAuthor's Response: Yea, I don't think I ever could have made Hermione pregnant. It just doesn't fit with her; at least, not that early.
I'm so happy you've enjoyed this and plan to read the rest, :D
Thank you very, very much! Report Review
Again, lovely story! :) Love Hermonie/Draco pairing!Author's Response: Thank you much! Report Review
In the picture who is who??Author's Response: Uh... Blaise is Bruno (bottom) and Theodore is Avan (top). Report Review
Draco has grey eyes not blue just sayin' and constructive criticism is important!Author's Response: I know he does, sorry. Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
I think there should be a prequel to this story!Author's Response: Ah, I'm not really sure on what exactly I'd write for that, though, so.
Thank you! Report Review
Commented on your newest Draco/Hermione too. Just wanted so say: Looove your pictures too! So beautifull. You got one more fan today for sure.Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much! :D Report Review
This was my first Dramione story ever and it was awesome!!!
10/10Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Don't forget to check out its sequel: Radiant, and I've even got another Dramione up if you'd like to read that, as well: Grazed Knees.
Thank you so much! :D Report Review
its...over? aaw! i love the picture of the two of them!Author's Response: It is, unfortunately, but there is also the sequel (Radiant) and the sequel's prequel (The Lightning Strike), haha.
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Aw it's over! but even though it was the epilogue for this story, it was the prologue for Radiant. clever clever. :D I really loved the story!! AWESOME job, chica!! XD
p.s: 100!Author's Response: Ha ha, see what I did!
I really hope you read and like Radiant, :D It's pretty fun, and it was a super good time to write.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this, though, yay!
Thank you so very, very much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
aw, they're now living together!^__^
Yay the war ended and they won!! XD
booo for all the people dying! T_T
i really like how you wrote out the scene though, how like hermione and draco are resting and then he remembers what happens. great job! :D
p.s: 99!Author's Response: YAY, YOU FINALLY REVIEWED!
And yessums, :D
Things are finally happy.
Awh, thank you, (:
I figured I'd do it a little differently than usual.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and I'm so very happy you enjoyed it! Report Review
I love your style of writing! I love the ending! Sweet and sappy, just the way I like it :) I'm just sad that it's over already; it was way too short for me :'( I am definitely going to check for more of your writing. Good job!Author's Response: Awh, thank you, :D
Yes, I definitely wanted to have a nice happy ending. And, I know what you mean, but I can promise another story like this in the near future.
Don't forget to check out the sequel, Radiant! It's already four chapters deep, :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing! It really does mean a lot to me, :D Report Review
Is it just me or do I feel rushed reading these past few chapters? I think you're rushing. Otherwise, I'm still determined to read all of this in one day :)Author's Response: Yea, you're probably right.
At the time, writing it, it didn't seem rushed because I wrote that series of chapters all at once, but, looking back, it almost definitely was.
I hope you've been enjoying it thus far, though, and I hope you continue to! Report Review
The whole story was really beautifully written, and I'm really really sad that it's at it's end. I'll definitely keep an eye out for the sequel. :) Keep writing stories, because you do a stellar job of it. :)Author's Response: The sequel is already up!
It's called Radiant, and it has three chapters. Also, there's a little surprise at the end of chapter three that I think you'll look forward to.
Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing this.
It really does mean a lot to me, :D Report Review
I'm a little confused. Why are they so confused as to who Draco is? He stayed with them all summer. And where did he sleep in the summer if they have no guest room?Author's Response: They aren't confused so much as concerned. Now Hermione and Draco are together while they were just friends over the summer.
And, I know, I confused it up with the guest room thing, but my best explanation is that it's under construction now while it wasn't during the summer.
I hope you continue reading and enjoying! Report Review
Wonderful end chapter! It was lovely and had a sad sweetness to it as I knew it was the end. I'll miss this story, but i'm sure I will get over it by reading your others! :P This one though will definitely be forever one of my favorites. You are incredible and I love your writing. Please don't ever stop! Author's Response: Thank youuu! :D
I hope you go over and read the sequel. It's called Radiant, and I'm pretty excited about it, :)
Awh, you are just the sweetest. Thank you so much.
And, I promise, I never will. Writing is my biggest passion. It rules my life sometimes, ha.
I'm so happy you enjoyed! Report Review
its ovver?huh it over!? *feels lost and hugs teddy.body shakes* No! No! NO!
Awesome story btw :DAuthor's Response: I know! I couldn't believe it when I hit the COMPLETED button. I was like, woah, wait, what?
Thank you a million for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Aww, it's done. I like the way you ended it by the way. No long winded explanations of how they got to where they are. Just a simple happily ever after.
Congratulations on finishing this.. Oh, and I'll be looking forward to that novella! ^^,Author's Response: I know, :( I'm so sad, I can't believe it.
Thank you, :D I'm really glad this came through well. I was worried about how people would receive it, so I'm glad to know that it was done right.
I've just posted the first chapter! I hope you enjoy it!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this, :D Report Review
It's nice that you've stuck to canon as much as you can about the battle, with the horcrux and all.. Aww.. It's almost done.. :)Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm glad that it worked because it's hard for me to stick to cannon as I usually warp it as much as I can, but I figured it would embellish the story nicely.
So, I'm happy to know that it came across well.
And, yea, I can't really believe it.
But thank you for reading! Report Review
I enjoyed it very much, but was definitely saddened to see the next chapter will be the last! :( Aw! Can't wait to read it though. This story has been amazing and well-loved as I have reread chapters and waited excitedly for the next. :)Author's Response: As will I.
I can't believe it's really almost over.
Thank you so much, though.
Your reviews have always been so amazing.
I hope you enjoy the epilogue! Report Review
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