Basically one of the best stories I've read on HPFF... the writing reminds me of Those Meddling Kids by iPodapalooza on One Direction Fanfiction (don't judge me!!)
I have this picture in my head of Louis realising James is in love with Lemon; he tells her that he had seven children, and that they are all set for careers in quidditch. Then he'll storm up a staircase and tell James that he better appreciate Louis' generosity. I really want some sort of dramatic, angsty yet funny thing to happen... please update! I only started reading today but I'm hooked! Report Review
So good! Lemon's character is perfect! Please update :( Report Review
I love this story. It's hilarious and cute and James and Lemon are awesome :) I can't believe that James basically admitted he liked Lemon and she doesn't even seem to have figured it out!! I guess he covered it up later, saying he was joking and not to worry about it, but before then? And in conjunction with his obvious episodes of jealousy (which were all completely adorable)? She's silly. But I think a lot of it is denial because she just thinks there's no way they would ever like each other as more than friends. I am, however, enjoying her pursuit of sex-on-legs Louis even though I'm naturally rooting for James. Lemon is fantastic and I can't wait to see what problems the rest of the year brings. And I like Holly and Rose, though I think Lemon might be a bit hard on Lily. She is very young and silly, of course. She'll probably grow up quite a bit still. Maybe.
Update soon!! Report Review
I love this so far!! And I have to say "I am pink lemonade" is a FANTASTIC line. Very witty.
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I meant Louis! Not Scorpius! Oopsies! Report Review
Can you please, please update again? I really like his story and where it's going, but I hate that we wait so long for chapters. I'm not trying to be horrible. It just kind of sucks. Anyway, I'm completely confused about who I want to end up with Lemon! I want something to happen with Scorpius, but also with James. SO CONFLICTED. Report Review
Haii:) Okay, I love this story so much! I was wondering, before you changed your banner and chapter images, who did you use for the picture of James? Or where'd you find them? I'm desperate for someone who looks like that for my banner. I've looked everywhere for a guy with dark hair to be Albus. So if you could answer me I'd love you forever:}
~Ashley Report Review
ADORBS! I really like James' character and Lemon and his relationship. I am looking forward to seeing real interaction between them. :)Author's Response: thanks! glad you liked it! :D Report Review
Ah I facepalmed so bad when she said "you had me at together". I honestly had to squeal with embarrassment for like a minute before I could continue. And I'm loving Sex-on-Legs Louis. I'm pretty sure at the moment I'm a Loumon shipper. This story makes me laugh like every two lines. And lily is one of my favourites. She makes me laugh more.
Shindig :DAuthor's Response: haha wow no Jamon? you might be the first! :D thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Lemon's ringtone for louis:
Your sexy and I know itAuthor's Response: hahahaha :D brilliant! :D thanks for reviewing Report Review
YAY UPDATE FINALLY!!!
This was a great chapter, and I can't wait to see more of James/Lemon.
Number 9 on the last list? Ha, Voldemort did seem very persistent...Hmmm...Maybe he'll pop later in this fic and there shall be an epic battle with Lemon-esque sarcasm and somehow she ends up hitting him in the eye with a hair-tie or something and then he dies.
I dunno. You come up with something.
Please update soon!Author's Response: uh i think that should be a spin-off...haha :D thank you for reviewing! Report Review
All I can is: This chapter was simply stupendous.
Well done, old bean. Well done.Author's Response: Thank you! :D Report Review
Update. Nao. That is all.Author's Response: how to the point of you :D thanks! Report Review
I am so unbelievably happy to see that you've updated this! The moment I started reading, I was immediately reminded of how much I love/missed this story! And I can't wait for the next update :D
Team James forever! :) :) :)Author's Response: i am happy too! :D :D i hope my writer's block stays far away! thanks for reviewing! Report Review
YAY! you uploaded. This was almost as bad as the separation between Lemon and James over the holiday.
Upload as soon as possible please.
p.s. I LOVE this story and its completely favorite zoned :PAuthor's Response: haha aw i do apologize but thank you for being my second new review! :D Report Review
EEP! I am so happy I can finally read more of Lemon's UNICORN journal entries, and James' adorably jealous outbursts. I love this story. Thank you for updating and please continue. JAMON forever! Author's Response: YAY first new review! :D thank you! JAMON forever indeed! Report Review
Oh my goodness this is hilarious! I laid my head on my desk to wait for the giggles to pass. And wowza she's deaf if she didn't notice James say he'd be a better boyfriend than Louis. The Waldo bit was priceless for the record.Author's Response: haha she was too into Louis to notice what amazing things were happening. :D thanks for reviewing! Report Review
i really like the story and you are a really good writer :)Author's Response: thank you! :D Report Review
Jamon! Jamon! Jamon!Author's Response: I am going to use this in my story haha. Report Review
I really love this story :) It's very funnny and quirky!
-RebeccaAuthor's Response: YAY! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
ıts soo good. Please write asap. Your story is really amazinnggg:))Author's Response: update is coming soon! thanks so much! Report Review
Your story is amazinnng !!! I mean u should really post the next chapter(s) asap. I check everyday and hoping that u posted. Please if u want i can help u your story is really good :) Pleaseee post it soon..Author's Response: update is coming soon! thanks so much! Report Review
Awesome chapter! I'm really enjoying this story : )Author's Response: update is coming soon! thanks so much! Report Review
This story is fantastic! I really hope you update soon because i can't wait to read more!Author's Response: update is coming soon! thanks so much! Report Review
its an amazing story !!! Its soo funny and enjoyable. Its amazing did i say it before :D You should write it soon i dont know how im gonna wait for the next chapterrAuthor's Response: update is coming soon! thanks so much! Report Review
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