epic! please update! Report Review
Loved this story. Even though you only mention the last name, I take it the girls first name is Hermione? I will go onto chapter 2 when I get a chance. 10/10 for this first chapter. Report Review
That guy was a bastard. Not loving a child is so wrong. I can tell. I adopted 6. LOL. Keep them coming.Author's Response: im fixing chapter 3 right now and posting it tonight hopefully in a few days its validated Report Review
Harry a bad guy? or an impostor? Now we have to wait! AHGR! Report Review
Fantastic!! Amazing!!Author's Response: thank you its my first story and i didnt know how it would turn out Report Review
You have a very nice plot, although you could analyze it a bit, stay in facts for more time, explain Hermione's emotions. Looking forward to your next chapter! xoxo _starlit_sky_Author's Response: yah i have the next 4 chapters. its my first story . i want people to actually think what she might be thinking. i have never written a story before so im just trying to see what ppl think sorry i sound rude but i dont want my thoughts to be lies to my readers Report Review
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