Hello there, since this was already written, and you wanted to enter it in my "Romance me Dangerously" challenge, I'd ask if you credit the chapters you write after you entered. Anyways, I don't fancy ScoRose, but it doesn't seem like a normal one. Scorpius as a Vampire? Interesting, indeed. Your grammar is pretty good and the only thing I see wrong is how much "man" is said, but it's cool. I also think it's a bit rushed. Anyways, on to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :D
I will definitely credit your challenge in my upcoming chapters. I know, I always tend to rush, but I will try not to rush in the rest of this story. :)

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Okay first i liked it. Alhough liz sounds like a stalker. But first and foremost, i need to say that there wasn't much descriptions or background info on any of the characters. the diaologue is spot on though. and i think the grammar is good.

as i've said before i love vampire stoies and lovers, lol, so i love this. Please write more soon,

Gin-gin

Author's Response: Aw, thank you for this feedback. :) I will definitely work on the characters. I know that I'm not that good at that because I'm one of those writers who start with the plot and not their (main) characters. :P But I will continue this when I have inspiration again. Thanks again for your review! :D

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Yay, there aren't that many vampire stories and I found one! Yay! On to the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! There aren't many vampire lovers around here either. ;p I'm glad you like it. :)

-Xxx- slg

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Cool story! Please [lease please write more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I don't have much time right now and the queue is closed now, but I will sure update it later!

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Oi! Love it. I see you like Vampire Diaries (me too). I search for kind of story like this and. Will it be an Edward/Bella kind of love? UPDATE SOON! Can't wait till the next chapter and i put it to my favourite stories.

Author's Response: O, that is so nic of you! Thank you! I think it will be a story like Edward/Bella or Elena/Stefan. :D But the queue is closed now and I am on acation, but I will try to update ASAP! ;) Thanks for the review!

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Such a great chapter and story! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. At first I thought it would be a great story, but then I became not so sure about it, but Seeing your review makes me proud of it again! Thank you! :)

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