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Review #1, by Cynthia. Gone

5th April 2013:

You really know how to go deep...

Thank you.

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Review #2, by FanFiCritic Gone

29th November 2010:
Wow. Amazing imagery in your lines:

"... his unseeing gaze tilts toward the window, the moonlight falling on his face, he ponders."


"Would she be lying encased in the white marble of his ancestors, awaiting the time when his eye-lids close and he joins her once again?"

A tormented and haunted Draco is a beautiful Draco. His life is a tragedy and that is one of the many reasons why our hearts cry out for him.

Beautifully written and very much deserving of an award.


Author's Response: Thanks so much for the absolutely gorgeous feedback :D I really appreciate it!

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Review #3, by harrypotterfre4k Gone

25th November 2010:
this one-shot is brilliant. i loved it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)

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Review #4, by No1HarryPotterFan Gone

25th November 2010:
Wow...that was so amazingly written and so beautiful. I loved it!
Did Hermione die or did she leave him for someone else? That was a little confusing.

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Review #5, by No_name Gone

24th November 2010:
That was really cool, I didn't expect hermione to be dead. The first word to come out of my mouth was 'Wow.'

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Review #6, by Hayley Gone

24th November 2010:

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Review #7, by dead_poet Gone

24th November 2010:
hey kylie,
i really appreciate the idea of your story - esteem the small things in life which sometimes seem so trivial such as waking up in the arms belonging to the person who supports and cares for you or even a little smile from a stranger across the seat in the tram. beautiful motive and amazingly written in such a few words.
love, christel

Author's Response: Thanks so much for yet another lovely review, Christel! I really appreciate all your feedback and I'm so glad you're enjoying my work.

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