Great job going back and fourth on the point of views. Nice story and interesting. You have a talent for picking the right words.Author's Response: thanks it is one of my favorite parings therefore its the easiest for me to write Report Review
Yes, I really liked it. I think it's great as is. Thanks for writing it!Author's Response: ur welcome lol. thank u for the feedback, i think its good as is too but u never know what others will think about it. Report Review
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