I absolutely love this story, can't wait to see what happens next!!! Report Review
holy crap!!! but great chapter. i cant wait to see what happens now. update again soon!! =] Report Review
Oh my Godric!!! xD I am loving this story so much! What an amazing idea! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Great job!!! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! It should be waiting for validation soon! Report Review
oh. wow. I can't even imagine what sirius must be going through right now, not to mention Remus and the others waiting to see if James is even alive after jumping out the window. and, WOW. Jasmine now seems as though she is in love with remus, because he is the one she thought of when she thought she was going to die. but she told sirus. and now... oh boy. this is getting REALLY good! :)Author's Response: Thanks alot! Reviews are really what keep me going, especially right now when school is so much of a time suck. Report Review
U r amazing! U came up with a new species, had love, drama, jelousy, and heart warming moments all in the story at the same time and it fit!Author's Response: Thanks! Your reviews mean so much to me! Report Review
I really enjoyed reading this chapter the first one was ok but i definitely liked this one. keep it up!!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm on Spring Break right now, so I'm borrowing my friend's computer. I won't be able to update until at least next Monday, but I hope to get one up soon! Report Review
Damn that was intense! Wow she really can't die. That would be kind of cool except that if something happens and she gets super depressed or something then she won't be able to commit suicide. I wonder if Sirius believes her now. I guess I will just have to wait and see. I can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I think you're my most faithful reviewer! I'm on Spring Break, so it'll be at least a week before I can update, but hopefully it'll be worth the wait. Report Review
No! You can't end it there! I have to know what happens! The whole idea of what she's going through seems so sad. I wish i could help her. Guess what, I went to Harry Potter World in Orlando. It was awsome! I can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)Author's Response: I'm so jealous that you went to the Harrry Potter theme park. I was supposed to, but it's so expensive. Anyways, I hope to have the next one in the queue by monday, so it should be up soon!
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holy crap!! this is such a good story!! i cant wait for more, update again really soon! 10/10! =]Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next one should be in the queue before monday (fingers crossed). Report Review
Wonderful! But I feel so bad for Lupin, Sirius, and Jasmine. Sirus and Jazz would have made a great couple, but now there is a connection between Lupin and Jasmine! You've made it so I don't know who to be rooting for! Please update soon :) I feel as though we may have gotten a glimpse of what Jasmine's speciality is, but I can't wait to know more.Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I don't upset people with the Remus/Jasmine and Sirius/Jasmine pairings. I've already got people picking sides! I'll update soon! Report Review
It's great so far! I think you did a wonderfuul job of making this an AU story that also lines up with the original :) I look forward to reading the other chapters.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I One of my goals, even though this is AU, is to keep it as close to the real Potter-verse as possible. Report Review
Okay, so I'm a author who's books or internationally sold and loved, and my books won to many medals to count and your writing is just perfect. You have a good base, ideas, details then you add expression to it and a lot. You have the feeling to be a writer your deep and humorous and can be serious when necessary. I adore this Fic. Word of advice, FINISH THE STORY, and when your done I could show your story to some people who could publish it in your name.Author's Response: Um, WOW, thank you.
I'm working on finishing it, I'm a bit of a perfectionist you see, a so it's taken a bit longer than I originally estimated. That, and real life has been a bit hectic. I plan on updating within the next few days, and having more regular updates afterwards. Report Review
I really like this story, it's interesting and I cannot wait to see what their fifth year unfolds. It's a really good story and I loved it! Great work!
Loved it!NatalieAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! It's nice to have people give me feedback, so I know that there are people actually reading and enjoying the story. Report Review
Woah! Sirius and Remus like her now! Uh oh, that cant be too good for their friendship. So is this going to be a Sirius/OC or a Remus/OC? Or maybe both? I'm so happy for her! She's not defective! But it sucks that everyone she loves is going to die while she lives forever. i can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! And it's going to have both Remus/OC and Sirius/OC parts. Report Review
Jazz and Remus together please?(:
I really like your story, it's very cute and I can't wait for Jasmine's powers to develop, it's an interesting storyline.
xxAuthor's Response: Thank you!
And I can't promise anything about the pairings yet. Report Review
Interesting and unusual, I loved the story of her past and the story seemed very real.Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you keep reading! Report Review
I liked this chpater. its nice to know what's been going on the last 4 years. Sirius likes her! Yay! I really like the part where him and Jasmine make that bet. I cant wait to read the results of it. Update soon! :)Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping it wasn't too confusing. And I'm really looking forward to that bet. Unfortunately, I won't get an update in before the holiday queue closure, but you can look forward to several after it re-opens. Report Review
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