I'm liking it a lot, and I can see...deep down James wants to be sweet, and I think the hate is unwarranted, because what guy isn't a little bit conceited, it's what makes them attractive (confidence I guess). I'm liking this story. Good start :) Report Review
Maggie is quite feisty but amusing as well. The introduction of her sister was certainly interesting. I hope you have lovely holidays and a good inspiration to update this story soon!
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This sounds like a very good story, please update soon. I was so sad when i saw that it was just one chapter :/
but so far so good :D Report Review
LOL omg ahah i love this :) Report Review
o my goodness i completeley and absolutely loveMaggie...Her eleven year old self reminds me of my self at age eleven; as does her seventeen year old self remind my of my self at seventeen...great believeable characters.
I really like the way you portrayed James..its unique most people portray him as so obviously humble..which is not very realistic..I'm really excited to keep reading!!
Keep up the great work:) Report Review
Great story! I love your writing style and Maggie is pretty cool so far. I like how Ginny and her mom were plotting to keep her and James away from each other. It made me smile :) I am excited for the next chapter!111 ^_^ Report Review
dang it theres only one chapter! and I was
looking foward to the next one...fudge:(
10/10Author's Response: d'aww don't worry, i'm working on the next chapter this weekend! glad to know you like it enough to want the second chapter right away! Report Review
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