Wow, when saying i would do the review for the review on the forums i didnt realize i had already read and reviewed two of your stories!! :D I'm glad however that i did choose this one. For some reason, some odd reason i have grown liking to Narcissa Malfoy. She is such a diverse character and i love how you gave her reason for all she did. This was a great piece, as was your last two i read!! xx JessAuthor's Response: oh, hello :D i thought I had seen that penn name somewhere :p i have never really liked narcissa that much but i just begun thinking about she must be really feeling about everything, especially when she lied to the dark lord to save Harry and look for her son. im so glad you enjoyed it and you thought it was great! eep! :D thanks so much! Report Review
I liked it a lot. I can't help feeling sorry for Narcissa.
But she is right, she deserved to die.
Very good :DAuthor's Response: everyone deserves to die, so says sweeney todd.
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Deep words, I tell you, deep words.
My fav. part is when she said Voldemort wasn't going to kill Harry because he may have cheated on an exam or because he broke into Gringotts.
And of course when she said she deserved to die.
Keep up the AHmazing work!
like, a million/10Author's Response: thanks so much! i never really thought my words were deep... glad to know they are, and absolutely DELIGHTED to see you are reviewing another one of my stories (unless you reviewed this one first, but on that note i saw the DWDGTL review first). That is one of my favorite parts too in this. thanks so much! Report Review
Love that song!!!
It's a small onefic, but very emotional and strong!
I never quite felt that Narcissa would actually performed first-degree murder (and killing.. and slaughtering..) but it really makes you think about her perspective on it! And how Purebloods and Death Eaters are raised in the belief that everyone really does deserve to die.
None of the Malfoys go to Azkaban canon-wise either, but I loved the way it ended- much more dramatic this way.Author's Response: thanks so much Junie! I know, Later i found out that canon-wise they skipped azkaban thanks to Narcissa lying, but this fit better and I didn't know back then :) Report Review
I loved it. It was just so powerful, to feel Narcissa, how she did not want to do this, how she was in denial... "they deserve to die" that was amaizing! i am a fan of sweeny todd too :) you are so good at this!
8.5/10!Author's Response: i just love sweeney todd. Johnny depp is one of my many loves :) Report Review
I loved it :) You should totally write more stories! You are my favorite author in hpff :D YOU ARE AWESOME :) all your stories i've read are awesome and make my day. Keep writing, seriously.Author's Response: thank you thats so nice! i never thought my stories would make someone's day! i really appreciate it! of course I'll keep writing!
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