I loved All Our Furute Sins and I loved this as well. I always liked Lily / Damein better than Rose / Scorpius as they totally belong together. :)
Great job with this!
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I love this. :D
Lily and Damien are my favourite couple - or potential couple as it was - from All Our Future Sins. So when I read that you had written a one-shot about them, I was rather excited.
Thank you! It was a lovely read!Author's Response: Hey, darling! Well, stay tuned for updates. :) The final chapter will be posted this weekend.
I am really happy you liked this, I had the urge to write more, but somehow I felt this was enough.
Thank you very much for showing me your appreciation! Report Review
I love it. :)
For me it's kind of sad, but at the same time sweet. :)
Thank you for writing this! :)
krapfmAuthor's Response: Hey, dear, than you for commenting on this. It means a lot to me to know that you appreciate this story!
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Sorry, sorry, sorry, it's me, again.
I just want to say that I've reread both Chapter 18 of All Our Future Sins and this again... they fit.
New perspective! So I still think this fic wasn't as good as AOFS (sorry, I'm tired of writing it out) but it was good. Better than most, and especially great coming from a person whose first language isn't English. You did a good job and I'm glad to have read this.
Sorry for being so bipolar, but rereading it totally changed my opinion.Author's Response: Hey, dear,
I totally understand your perspective, but, at the time something stopped me from writing any further.
Now that I'm not that involved with it I'm planning some changes, so stay tuned for updated. :)
Oh, and the final chapter from ALL Our Future Sins is half-done so it should be posted in a fortnight.
Huge thanks for your support, you have no idea how much it means to me.
Hey! It's me again. Well, I said I'd read it, and I did. And it's pretty good.
But to be totally honest... I expected a whole lot more. You are a really wonderful writer, and I expected a lot more from the creator the fantastic All Our Future Sins.
Well, I think that my view is partly skewed because I wanted more Rose and Scorpius in the story. When the story ended, I was slightly disappointed with Hype's no show. But since this is a fic on Damien/Lily, I probably should known. Ah, well.
Um, with this quote:
'Rose had been courageous, and a fire-cracker, and not the softie she had gone now. Rose would have kicked her ass and made her lose the herself in a Pensive'
I think that the phrases 'not the softie she had gone now' and 'made her lose the herself in a Pensive' were confusingly written. I don't think the 'the' in the second phrase was needed.
Anyway, I also found that there was no background information. Why did Lily wish she was dead? Why did Rose become such a pushover? Maybe I'm missing something here, but I didn't understand why the two of them were so...hopeless, then how they were in All Our Future Sins. I felt that the scene between Lily and Damien in Chapter 18 was more tender and sweet and more...well, I don't know, I just liked it slightly better.
This was still excellent though. 8/10 Report Review
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