ooh, that was so beautiful and well written, it was nice to read something from teddy's point of view, it seems like people often forget that teddy had lost his parents.
thanks for the great story!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :D
And Yeah, I thought so. Thats why I wrote it. And I must admit I adore Tonks/Remus â¥
Thanks for the lovely review.
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Aww what an emotional story! I really enjoyed it. It's natural for Teddy to want to know as much as he can about his parents. I'm just glad he has Harry to look out for him, as he knows what he's going through. Excellent work!Author's Response: Brilliant! I'm glad you liked it.
I've always liked the link that Harry and Teddy have with eachother, So I thought I'd use it in a fic ;)
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Aww, this was so bittersweet!
"My little caterpillar", it's such a fitting nickname. I love to think Tonks, Remus and their little baby boy had some happy moments together, but it's also sad that we know those were limited.
Well done, really a nice piece! I really enjoyed this little game :D
Happy Christmas, your Secret Santa!
xxx LeoAuthor's Response: Eep, Finally my secret santa is revealed, Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews Leo.
Thanks, I'm glad you thought the nickname was fitting. I imagined Tonks giving Teddy this unusual nickname so I just had to throw it in ;) hehe.
Hope you had a wonderful christmas.
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A very sweet story. I love the entire caterpillar thing, very creative! :)
This actually brought me a really nice sense of closure that I've never felt with the entire Remus, Tonks, and Teddy situation and it's fantastic!
I think you've got the general sense of emotions down and your style/syntax really creates an interesting atmosphere and is very enjoyable!
I look forward to reading more from you :)Author's Response: Thank You!
I'm glad you feel I wrote this right because I was a tad worried about this ^.^
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:O You're amazing. I'm so glad I did this swap thing; I've discovered so many amazing stories!
Your tone is delicate and feathery and conveys emotions with perfect clarity. Kudos, kudos, kudos. Your descriptions are flawless, as are your characters.
Oh my God. The letter gave me chills. Writing a letter for my son (I fantasize about having a son son. It's weird, I now. I want him to be just like James Potter...:)) to read when he grows up. ^^ Anyway, the letter is *so* cute and well-written. Especially the "over the moon" bit.
And I love the idea of Teddy as Tonks' "caterpillar." The transformation idea and all that. Brilliant.
It kind of reminds me of when Harry finds Lily's letter to Sirius in Grimmauld Place. It's funny how things recur, and different people can feel the same things.
Oh, the memory is too beautiful - words cannot express. :) Especially in the moment of connection between Reems and Teddy.
And your last line is absolutely perfect.
LOVELY work. Ta ta!Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed the story :')
My aim was to make it seem like Harry finding Lily's letter so I'm glad you picked up on it.
Also, I thought the whole transformation thing would be perfect so I'm glad you liked that part too :')!
Thanks for the wonderful review!
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That was cute XD . I liked how his hair was changing color and how he saw his gan taking that picture that was there today. A few spelling mistakes but it was good! Really liked it!
WhatAboutRegulusAuthor's Response: Thank You! I got the inspiration for the "photo" thing from a dream I had about my grandparents, so I tried to include it here.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm thinking of getting a BETA too look this over for me for spelling/grammar mistakes etc.
Thank you for the review
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