This sounds like a promising start to your story(: Hope to read the next chapter soon.

Oh && at one point you said "Piss of", instead of "Piss off" You use said a lot, maybe switch it up a bit more next time? Variety of word choices is always good(:

Author's Response: Thank you!

Yeah I know :/ I wrote that beginning of the story a while ago, and am just starting up with it again now. I have a few mistakes in it and I'm trying to get a beta for it! I recently started trying to switch that up! Someone else told me that today too! I am working on it though! So don't you worry!

Thank you so much for the review! I'm hoping to post another chapter soon :)

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This sounds good :) can't say more to this story right now lets see how it continues :D

Author's Response: Oh thank you! :) I'm in the middle of writing the next chapter, its proving hard to get my mind on the paper but it will eventually.!

Thank you for the review! It just made my day :)

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WhatAboutRegulus: Hello! as you can see from my name I forgot to log in before reviewing. Oops. Anyway...

I love Lily/James fics, and havn't read one for a while so I give this one a bash;], I'm enjoying it already quite, I think it'l be interesting to see what James does to travis, and what he does too win Lily's heart *cue awws*

Those two belong together, Don't you agree? ;D
Great Chapter!
- Laurie.

Author's Response: Psh? Do I agree! Hell ya! hahahah I love Lily and James and how they came to be. Lily hating him and then all the sudden loving him? It's so messed up! Yet totally awesome! I am excited to write this story. Already half way through the next chapter, which I really want to put up soon, but want to make sure absolutely nothing is wrong with it :)

Until then! Thanks for the review :)!

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Are you gonna make another???
If not well you should.

Author's Response: Hahahah yes I am going to make another. I like this story. I just have to make sure my plot is on track before I post it :)

Thanks for the review!!!(There will be another chapter)

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I like this. definitely a great starter and you portray lily and james' interaction well. so, I'd love to read more :D 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks!! I love writing James and Lily :) favorite era!

Thanks for the review! Almost half way through the second chapter.

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Very good beginning, I love how James is. Just work on spelling and puncuation though, because it made it a bit hard to read at the beginning. Anyway, great job, update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I swear I got all that good stuff :/ I looked over it only a billion times haha. I'm glad you like it though!

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Keep writing!
It is fantastic!
Please finish it!
I really want to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am almost done writing the next chapter :)

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