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Review #1, by LadyMalfoy23

23rd January 2011:

Hello dear! It is lady Malfoy from the Forums!

I must say this is a very unique next gen. I mean the whole Scor/Rose ship tends to be a cliche and you did make this semi cliche, but to a whole new level of Greatness!! ;) hehe

At first i have to say i was getting a little lost on the plot development but after their Graduation it made more sense!! I think you might want to look into the Transition from them all. Like at the begining of all of the new time frames it might help making it slightly easer to tell. Also i cant quite tell, Was Rosie a slytherin in your story? All in all i found this to be a fantastic story!!! :)

Author's Response: Hahah yeah it was kind of a chiche but I'm glad to know that it wasn't too bad.

Rose was in fact a Slytherin; I'm sorry that that wasn't communicated clearly. And I'll check up on the transitions.

Thanks again.

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Review #2, by HP0247

Only Chapter

20th November 2010:

Ummh, I generally liked this, but it felt incomplete and I can't put my finger on exactly how. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the honesty. If you have any other suggestions, please let me know.

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