All in all this was a pretty good story. It had a great plot line and was strictly to the point. Personally i would have liked to know a little more of what was going on in Lilly's head the whole week that she was ignoring James. It would have added more depth and suspense to the final kiss in the end! all in all great job i look forward to reading more from you!Author's Response: Thank YOuu!!! i wrote this ages ago and i hate editting my stories. I just wanted to see what ppl thought of it. still im glad that ppl think its a good story. xx Report Review
Aw :D JilyRonks x x xAuthor's Response: thank youu Report Review
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