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Review #1, by ericajen Chapter Two

12th December 2010:
Well the end there left me confused, but I suppose that's probably the point, huh? It'll be interesting to find out more about Ray's past, I think. Sometimes POV changes can annoy me, but I think in the case of this story it can actually be a pretty good thing. It's nice to get those different perspectives, especially since Sirius and Ray don't seem to know that much about each other. Anyway, keep up the good work(:

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. This is my first time writing in different POV's and I'm glad that you think I'm doing an alright job of it :) And yes, the end was meant to confuse people, hopefully it's got you intrigued. Thanks, the school holidays are nearly here, so hopefully I can get the chapters going a lot quiker.
Vic :)


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Review #2, by ericajen Chapter One

12th December 2010:
I think this sounds pretty interesting. There were a couple typos, and a couple areas where I got a little confused, but I was able to sort myself out and besides those minor things, it's written pretty great. Ray seems pretty intriguing, and I like her nickname. That's cute. Another plus is your take on Sirius. We can all appreciate the ladies man, womanizing Sirius, but occasionally it's nice to read about a version of him who takes things a bit more seriously with girls, so that's another nice thing for this story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I know what you mean about the Sirius thing. I've read a lot of fan fics where Sirius is the womanizing ladies man, though I'm quite sure whether J.K. meant him to be seen by that, but that's just what I think. I'm glad you liked it.
Vic :)


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