That was very well done! I enjoyed this chapter very much, and it shines a little light on Andromeda's persona. I'm hoping and going to assume that there will be more chapters for this?! PLEASE tell me there will be, it would be INSANELY cool to read more!!
Well Happy Holidays, and Happy Writing,
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Oh look! Another Andromeda/Ted story. I recently wrote a one-shot that should be up any day soon of these two. I actually really love this. The characterisation is a little different to my own but it was still really really amazing. Continue soon please and I'll give you a thousand cookies! :D Report Review
I would just recommend proof-reading this a few times. There are a few grammatical errors and things that take the reader out of the story. Also, toward the end when you say the Goyle twins, you then say Ursula and Imogene Crabbe, so who was it? That confused me.
As far as the story is going, I think its really good, interesting, and believable. Report Review
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