{reviewid: 2458638, reviewer: 'weasleywheezes'}
1st January 2011:
This is great!! Yur a good writer! Cant wait for the next chapter though
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{reviewid: 2458611, reviewer: 'iseah'}
1st January 2011:
Great! u should go on though.
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{reviewid: 2443745, reviewer: 'Pacific%20Wizard'}
1st December 2010:
Millie: Oh my, what a great start to what will be an amazing story I'm sure. Well written and your characterizations are spot on. Can't wait to read about Harry's reaction to his son and of course his first encounter with Ginny. I know the news of his being married will be shattering to her as the news to Harry that he has a son with Ginny. I think that when he finds out that Sarah withheld his letters all those years he will feel as betrayed as if she had an affair. I think I would. No one has that right.
Excellent story line here. Can't wait for your next chapter. Very Well Done. PW
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{reviewid: 2439115, reviewer: 'Harrymylove'}
23rd November 2010:
Great story, will be looking for next chapter. Soon hopefully!
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{reviewid: 2438981, reviewer: 'Harry%20Potter%20Lover'}
23rd November 2010:
really like this story so far. good twist with the kid at the end (: keep writing.
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{reviewid: 2438891, reviewer: 'Stephanie'}
22nd November 2010:
GINNY AND HARRY HAD A KID TOGETHER?! Well, if Harry doesn't know about Sarah hiding those letter, wonder what will be his reaction when he finds out? UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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{reviewid: 2438755, reviewer: 'hp_gwrocks'}
22nd November 2010:
:) harry and ginny had a baby.? ooo i can not wait to read the next chapter. :)`
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{reviewid: 2434706, reviewer: 'Pacific%20Wizard'}
13th November 2010:
Millie: Wonderful start to what will be a great story. I liked the way you had the story broken up through the different points of view. That gave your story clarity and character development. I imagine that Harry's bride will cause a stir, angst and resentment from many, especially a certain red-haired witch. Combine that sub plot to the new war that's coming and this should be an exciting ride. I'll keep reading. Well done. PW
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{reviewid: 2434443, reviewer: 'Stephanie'}
12th November 2010:
Wasn't expecting Harry to be married! She doesn't sound so bad, but it was selfish of her to keep the letters away from Harry. Surprised Harry doesn't seem upset with her. UPDATE SOON PLEASE! Wonder how Ginny is going to react finding out Harry is married?!
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{reviewid: 2434269, reviewer: 'Mrs%20HJ%20Potter'}
11th November 2010:
I really like this so far so update soon.
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